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Lies and Deceit & Juuust Kiidding

Your kind words are forcing me to crawl out of this hell I’d created for myself.
For so long I’ve tried to hold it all in, keep it together ‘cause I should have known better.
I’m beginning to see that the screwed up one has never been me.
No matter how sad I try to be, your there to bring me back into reality.
I’m asking new questions…where’s he going with this and where will this lead?
Pleasantly surprised by every sincere line.
I’m happy to say that your changing my mind.
The view from the bottom isn’t quite as clouded.
I’ve waited for so long but I think I may have just found it.
Attempting to be skeptical, all my attempts are dashed by your sudden bouts of randomness.
Here we go again!
Nothing but lies and deceit followed by Juuust Kiiddding!

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You know who you are Thanks hun.
Written April 1st, 2005

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  • bw43
    July 21, 2005
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    wow... i liked this alot. it was awesome great work


  • Cutieindahurley
    April 2, 2005
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    Even if others can't see the meaning that's fine <---told ya I'd use your words against ya he-he Juuust Kiidding!


  • April 1, 2005
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    I'm moved

    I hope other people are able to appreciate this for what it is. It is both meaningful and comedical at the same time and has a special meaning for two people. I'm happy to be one of them!

  • Cutieindahurley
    April 1, 2005
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    The last line is an inside joke...forgot it was April 1st lol. Thanks for commenting it made me smile I'll be sure to stop by and check out your work.


  • Cowgirl062388
    April 1, 2005
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    hmmm.. I'm kinda thinking that someone like, maybe, told you off, was saying all these harsh words to you, and then in the end tricked you by saying April Fools? that's what I'm getting, and in that case, this person, I hope, better be one of those people who can pull it off!! lol... anywho, great job! and Happy April Fool's day!!

    ~Cowgirl

  • freakaboutfrosty
    April 1, 2005
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    haha. this is great.

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