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You Don't Know Me

You see a body.
Eyes with green and blue.
Hair blonde w/black.
Breasts and ass.
You know not of my soul.

Angst
All
Desire
 of
Love
  these
Pain
   plus more fill
my soul to the brim
over flowing with
a need that cannot be fulfilled.
I am lost forever
in the world of
unknown.

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Written March 31st, 2005

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  • angel tears
    March 31, 2005
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    your words are overflowing with emotion... wonderful write. the structure of the piece adds to all of the feelings the words are conveying