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The heart stands alone

The heart stands alone
alone in the door
Where no one cares
for it any more.
Now the door is closed
and no one can find
all of the hearts
that were left behind

The heart need love
now it had one
some where the words of love
just call for me
the door just open
and for one more love
just for the last one
and the one I love
Forever

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Written March 31st, 2005

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  • Gott ist tot
    November 24, 2007
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    Interesting love poem. I found this quite sad in the first verse.
    Thanks for your comment


  • Xxxxxxxxx
    June 17, 2005
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    hauntingly lonely

    definitly a longing feeling in your words.
    seems as you you might willingly wait forever,too.
    wonderfully written express of feeling in your words.
    -cheers