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the dream

I stand here
looking around
I am in a land of darkness

there is only a faint beam of light
I run toward it
every step
it gets farther

it is like I am not even walking
finally I get to it
it goes out

all becomes light
it is blinding me

then I see what is really there
it is nothing I have ever seen before
everything here is dead
the air tastes of death

all goes dark again
there is spotlight on me
I freeze
I am drifting upwards
I look down
layers of decaying skeletons
cover the ground

someone says
-We are so different than you-

-Who are you?-
silence

I am dropping

they say
-Goodnight forever-

I survive the fall

there is a door
I go to it

I am in my room and safe again
I guess it was all a dream

Author notes

a little more of a short story then a poem but i'n saying its a poem and theres nothing you can do about it
Written March 31st, 2005

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  • hells punk
    April 11, 2005
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    wow this is realy good!! i liked it.keep up the good work.......i would write more but my comp sux and its tweeking out well c ya