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one beat

boom boom
hear that, it our hearts together as one
as one rhythm one beat
but when you left there was no song
that boom is now alone and your rhythm is gone
know my heart just boom
a single beat doesn't make song
i want us be one again
i want us to be in love

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Written March 30th, 2005

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  • A Lunar Farewell
    May 16, 2005
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    i love the emotion its so deep,awesome

    very deep.i had my ear to my gf's heart last night just listening to the beat and this reminds me of the best day ever.i love poetry that i can just feel the emotion on it.