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confession

how can i be my self when your not around
when u made me more sure that u were one
that no one the world can every be like u
that every time i see you made my heart pound
it hurt when said goodbye and i truly cant move on
i want start over and have that moment again
were u look into eyes laying on the bed
when u got nervous with the first kiss
the first time i was speechless
and sorry that every hurt u
please i just want a second chance i think our love relationship deserve try again



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Written March 30th, 2005

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  • BlackRaven
    May 4, 2005
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    This poem was really good!! I liked it I am addin you to my favorites!!

  • hisgirl-10
    March 30, 2005
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    i like this
    you did a great job,
    at expressing your feelings
    GREAT WRITE,
    von bentley
    (hisgirl-10)