It hit me
When I was thinking
I saw you
YOU
If I just breathe everything will be all right...
I will see you,
I know
I have felt you
I think
But I await you
There may be distances between us
but know I have felt you
You are me
I am you
It seems I have waited forever for you
This is a dream
The problem is that it is
Perfect
I think I love you,
though I haven't found you yet
I just felt you soul somewhere
You have never met me,
never talked,
never known...
Oh the heavens can this be true
A nightmare and a wish
To be whole once more
We were split
I long to be with you again
As we were at the dawn of time
I touched your soul
I believe I have found you
But I know not where you are
Please find me
I know you now
I accept you for what you are
The bond
I accept it now
No more fighting
I await you
If you will come to me
I await you, and if I breathe I can wait forever
to get lost in your eyes
We are one
Author notes
This was really weird, this is very personal, but very unusual for me...I NEVER write love poems.....I can't really describe what I think and feel..so I will leave it at that
Written March 30th, 2005
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A heartfelt longing for your One. Full of passion and hunger without being sappy. A quick pace that speaks of your quickly beating heart as you dream of what is to come.
I do believe there is One perfect and whole for us. The problem with most people is, they are not willing to wait, and they take the first train coming. That you seek One that is True speaks much of your nature. There is that one, being prepared this moment, just to make contact with You when the time is right. May you both find each other and Be!
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beautiful. and haunting, the only two words for it!
loves you forever
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You are so amazing!
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I SO needed to let this out....I couldn't get to sleep because of it last nite...I feel very weird
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Thankyou....that is exactly what it is
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i really like your poem. i'm sure many people have felt this way. where we create the perfect someone for us in our heads but the feeling we get from that person is so strong we believe it's more. that they are real so we're willing to wait for them, to be with them when they finally find us. that the connection is so deep that we're not complete without that person in our lives.
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