No other love have I known like ours
Once in a life time comes such a love.
Loving you has filled my heart with joy
Overpowering my senses with your smile;
Visions of your face appear in my dreams
Everywhere I look you are smiling there.
Laughter fills our lives so completely
I love you to the very depths of my soul;
Kisses that thrill me beyond any other
Each time we touch I melt inside.
Oh my love how did I ever exist before?
Until you came along love was lost to me;
Reaching out, you took my hand, held it
So tenderly, we fell in love that day.
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Written March 30th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Meaningful Acrostics by into your eyes.
350 points, ended April 7, 2005, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Such beautiful, romantic and gracious lines from the heart. This is certainly a treasured moment for two people in love
Jim
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eternal poet stole my line! LOL! There really is no poem out there like this one! Awww i wish i could write love poems! Because this is just so gorgeous, i would be proud to show my man a poem like this! I love the love concept and the way you put him up above you and make him look like a knight in shining armour he really must be something special! best of luck!
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ooops, i forgot, something, sorry to write it again, but then, , gee, how can i forget those??
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4 stars ****
NO POEM LIKE YOURS , yeah, believe me, i have read them and i have read you, you are typical, and your acrostics are always refreshing, always give a cool effect to oneself, youare going on nicely with your write jenni, take cares and have a nice time jennifer, just keep it up dear jenni, your humble little friend..
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*sigh*
i love love poems.
beautiful write. made me smile.
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WOW.. a poem that flows with the beating of your heart. It is simplely very beautiful. It discribes love to perfectly. You did am amazing job putting such feeling and life into this poem. I always look forward to reading your poetry as it always have such a special and unique feel to it. Thank you for posting another masterpiece.
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