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Searching my soul

Sitting, staring - thinking of you
Searching my soul for thoughts of you
I'm missing, I'm wanting you close by my side
I'm missing your touch on my cheek last night.

The distance is tearing my soul apart
I'm thinking, I'm struggling to feel your touch.
I'm wanting to feel your breath on my skin,
Your voice in my ear as you whisper my name.

I want you, I need you  - more each day
I want you I need you right by my side
I love you, I need you, I feel you now -
Right by my side - where you belong. .

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Written March 30th, 2005

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  • Thayla
    March 30, 2005
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    This one is different, but just as good. You decribe the longing inside you very well. I missed the person and I haven't even met them. Great write