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Just your average no one

trying to prove herself.

wishing she was someone

not that heart upon that shelf.

Just your average girl,

trying to be worth loving

wishing she didnt have to hurl

to make her feel like something.

Just your average stupid teen,

trying to stay alive

but everyday you watch her bleed,

knowing shes trying to hide.

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Written February 28th, 2005

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  • rksweetpunk
    March 29, 2005
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    awww you're so sweet, it's not auto-biographical, i used to be like that but not anymore, it's about a friend of mine and a stupid guy she gave her heart to who doesnt show her how much she's worth.

  • brokenstardust
    March 29, 2005
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    awesome

    great poem....i just wish you weren't so sad...