I want to climb that road to passion,
Want to make that trip once more.
I want to drive with wild abandon,
Put the pedal to the floor.
I want to feel the wind sweep through me
As I fly around the bend
Toward that highway of desire -
I want to feel love again.
I want to feel your body on me,
Want your skin pressed close to mine.
I want to feel pain from the pressure,
Want to be so intertwined
That it's impossible to tell
Just where my body starts and ends.
Two lovers fused into one form -
I want to feel love again.
I want to feel your fingernails
Running ridges through my back.
I want to wilt under the pressure
Of your violent attack.
So shake off all your inhibitions
There's no reason to pretend.
I need your fire and your hot passion -
Make me feel love again.
I want to run my lips all over
From your toes up to your head.
I want my tongue to cause such ecstasy
You hold on to the bed.
I want an animal beneath me,
From which I cannot defend
Against the onslaught of your will -
I want to feel love again.
I want all reason to forsake me,
Want the world to disappear.
I want to be reduced to whimpering
With your voice in my ear.
I want to be a locomotive
Chugging wildly 'round the bend
Toward my final destination -
I want to feel love again.
I want release from all my sorrows
And I want to take you there.
I want to feel your satisfaction
Through the wetness in your hair.
So let your passions overwhelm me,
In the morning we'll be friends
But, for tonight, I need your power -
Make me feel love again!
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Written March 29th, 2005
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WOW!!
I'm blushing!! Doesn't take much thought to make me blush, although this site is curing me VERY quickly. -
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Awww..this is so sweet and powerful. I think all of us can relate to this one. Very very well done...I can relate to this piece actually right now the power to feel loved and needed.
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Very nice! I love the emotions.
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Oh My God! *Shakes head, closes mouth (I know, much to your dismay)* Uhhh.....I don't know what to say. Stunning write for me to read in the middle of the work day. Thanks for the mood shift.
It's been much too long since I've read you.....must upgrade and sign on again at home (cancelled my ip because I wasn't on much anymore). Wasn't expecting this from you.....don't remember reading erotica dipped in your ink.
Impressive, as usual. I can't believe I've stayed away so long!
just for good *ah hem* measure.....
~ ~ Sincerely, Janet ~ ~
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LOLOL!!
Where is the way to Robin's Roost again??? 
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meow!
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Maybe....I'll start wearing catnip underwear. Maybe that will help!!!
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Even the domesticated can have a wild streak when the right cat comes along to draw it out of them
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Thank you, lyrical Soul...the only animals I find are already domesticated
....but I'll keep looking!
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Hot steamy stuff here Balladeer! Very nice. The longing to feel love again ~sigh. Yeah I know what you mean. It has been WAY too long! Great write and I hope you find that animal you're looking for
~Lyrical
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me too!!!! you can check out my erotica and see if you like it@;--
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mmmm sexy very hot its a great write
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Hey, Lori! a lot of us have those wishes...Florida and Canada - we're almost neighbors!!!
Glad you enjoyed it, miss
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WOW...... very hot and steamy is right but very well written, and I have some of the same wishes and desires as your poem... lol
Awesome... Lori
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Please send a map to the shed! I'm ready!!
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Maureen...and I love the way you love "love". It is indeed what makes life worth living. Of course, with your looks, you would never have to say the words of the title to anyone...lucky devil!
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Hey, UrLife, I thank you for enjoying this poem! I'm very glad you got so much out of it and I appreciate you!
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How "UP" is up Sweetie?
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wild abandonment...those are the exact words to express the feeling. I'm up for it!!
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Thank you, Mr. Vertigo. I agree with you completely that meter is everything in rhyming poetry. One of the reasons rhyming poetry gets such a bad rap is that people abuse or disregard the meter or else try to force it and we all know that nothing sounds worse than BAD rhymed poetry. Personally, I dream in iambic so I don't normally have a problem with meter. I do, however, have a problem with brevity! I get to enjoying it so much I don't want to stop, I guess. At any rate, I appreciate your in-depth view and your kind comments. Peace...
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Well, von, read it again before he goes to work tomorrow morning. Poor Dave!! Poor LUCKY Dave!!!
Good to see you, von
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Chuggin may be an american term but hot-to-trot is pure Aussie and this is bloody brilliant.
All those delicious phrases - made me wish I'd read this before Dave went to work this morning
I really enjoyed this Mike - correction I AM really enjoying this
Von -
That's it, Mr Poet
tell it like you know how
Just a few little words
with just the right meter
But oh, how you put it all together
Superb
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This is pretty awesome b/c it rhymes and it gets one all steamy reading it...lol. The feeling of a soft moan in an ear sends an echo throughout the body, sending chills up and down the body. Very nicely done.
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Obviously, nurse Chilly, you have never had anyone make you chug...what a shame!!! If you had, you might feel differently No, I agree, it's not erotic but I'm still getting used to all of the classifications here and, from what I seen of the "adult" poems, they seem to be a little on the crude side with a lot of cursewords thrown in for shock value, so I opted for erotic on this one....sorry but thanks for letting me put a smile on your face at least...lemme know when you're ready to chug
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hahahhah lololol ohh sorry.. you had me till the chuggin'.. hahahha ohh my.. sorry.. it spoiled it right there.. sorry!!
What an anti-climatic moment..
hmmm plus.. this is quite adult.. but erotic.. ??? no.. not really hun...
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Wow, what a great poem! This poem seems like a song..Or more like freestyle. Anyway this is such a good poem. This poem is full of passion. Between each sentence is youo can see what your really saying. Awesome!
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this was rather long for me but it was very good. it kept my attention. you did a nice balance between sensual and erotic.
it had an excellent flow. the rhyme a bit forced at times was still very good. and the meter was very good, that is what helped to pull me through the entire poem.
i could not help but feel that it was a song. like lyrics. that is the impression i got from the meter and rhyme. which is certainly a sign that you did right. poetry is/are lyrics without the music. i see alot of people fight their writes trying to rhyme or keep a constant meter. to me the meter comes before the rhyme. that we even use meter in freestyle. there is alwyas that rythmn of speech. if you create a smooth flowing rythmn to the poem, in my opinion. the only thing to me that exceeds meter is brevity. in longer poems though it becomes harder to pull that off because i think people spread it too thin thatthe brevity is lost. when i speak of brevity though i am talking about very poignant wisdom or emotion. maybe more wisdom than emotion perhaps, so i do not know that it applies to this necessarily.
this poem is very lyrical. it is more of a song and i could envision music with this. it is an excellent job of writing.
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Its nice to read this type of rhyme with out it falling into a cheep porn flick, well said, well done, full of passion...
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This is wild and full of passion. It's also full of the sadness of wanting to go back, of missing something in the past.
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Ah what a wonderful write my friend.
It reads like a song. and would do well set to music.
I could hear it singing through my head as i read it.
Brilliantly written as always.
Ann -
Very nice
Very nice poem. I tried to make it shorter and read it again only first and last stanza! It could be a shorter poem but also cery strong, but, I really understand your feelings.
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right, you and me, behind the bike shed now!!!! Now this is the kind of powerful write that sets me on fire, very erotic, yet done with class and style, not crude or distasteful if any way. I was carried along by the raw power in your words. Just wonderful to me
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powerful
wow, so powerful and intense, i really enjoyed reading this a lot, its my kind of thing.
keep up the good work
~Michael~
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hey this poem is really good.. thanks for posting such a good entry.. i loved the work.. and the rhyme scheme is simply awesome.. too good. kkeeeep it up.. well done..
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This is so well written and flows so weel. It;s a shame after such passion they are to become just friends, you don't find passion like this every day.
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I think you speak for many of us with this well-written poem. Love's passion comes and goes and when we are in the heat of love's passion, so to speak, that's when we feel most alive and look forward to each new day. Love makes life worth living. I want to feel 'that kind of love' again..anyone who says they don't is either afraid of having it and losing it or is not being honest with themselves. Love this poem..but then, I love love!!
♥ Maureen
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Awesome
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Holy sh*!!! That's SOOO great! I'm sorry I don't have anything very original, new, or unique to say about it, but I want you to know that I genuinely thought it was... oh! It's breath taking! The passion and vulnerability and confidence and aching yearning all combined to create an intense sexiness was gripping. And to weave it so perfectly together... I'm so impressed!!! I look forward to reading more of your work. Thanks for sharing. -
Impressive. The first stanza can almost stand on its own as a powerful venting of a desire on the echoes of a clarion call.
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passionate and a great read, strong imagery and intense. I enjoyed the repetition and I liked the flow as well. Good poem, well done on a good read.
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good jpb
awww to be young wild and in love again very well written thank you -
Such an amazing powerful poem. I just love it. i totally know what this means, and it made me smile, its sad but wonderful at the same time. great job! So intense so powerul, and so meaningful to so many keep up the good work
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ooo that was intense! no other word for it. made me.. well, yeah that was amazing. very great way to capture it.
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WoW! What an amazingly intense plea to feel that sense of wild abandonment again. To be free to love and be loved... without inhibition... without reserve... without fear... two lovers, with like minds. The way you have expressed such a desire is very impressive.
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Thank you, miss....I appreciate it
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Impressive flow of words- powerful repetition- descriptive imagery- this is very well written erotica! nice read
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