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"ONLY CHILD"

''ONLY CHILD''

I lay in the silence of a huge empty room,
through my window I gaze at the beautiful moon.

The house is as quiet as you'll ever see,
for brothers or sisters they'll never be.

In the quiet of night I feel so alone,
I yearn for a sister to call my own.

As I slip into slumber and off in my dreams,
I see a mountain of children with laughter and screams.

I pray for the day that it will soon come,
a home that is filled with more than just one.

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Written July 9th, 2001

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  • XxnecovesperxX
    August 31, 2001
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    it's too true! a house can never be called a home without love.


  • CafeAuLait9185
    August 11, 2001
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    oops i meant to rate that!

  • CafeAuLait9185
    August 11, 2001
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    Love the poem. I too am an only child. You captured it wonderfully.

  • Cecilia Rose
    August 6, 2001
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    oops i thought it was a diff aouther the message was to skye sorry, heh the poem still rulz though ::blushes::

  • Cecilia Rose
    August 6, 2001
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    you mean me right? lol yes it is, especially since you moved, oh well i know i'm an only child for life, thats why i write so much i havnt seen anyone yet w/ more than 65 poems! i'd gve this 10 stars if i could!


  • August 6, 2001
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    reminds me of a friend..i wonder sometimes if its that lonely for her


  • July 10, 2001
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    I too am an only child, and I feel that this poem captures an only child's longing to have a brother/sister and not feel so alone and isolated. An excellent poem.


  • Paezley
    July 10, 2001
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    as an only child myself i can relate... and when i was four or five the idea of a brother was very appealing... and then I made friends with a boy down the street who had an older brother and two little sisters. i spend a weekend at their home... and afterwards was very thankful for the peace and safety only child status brings. it's all a matter of perspective i suppose :^)

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