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all alone i'm touched
is it music? is it laughter?
my trembling soul cries
a never-ending shiver:
it is love
myra
2002
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Author notes
For the P of ABC. Thank you.
Written October 23rd, 2002
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A contest entry
- Love by Madison Mary.
650 points, ended September 10, 2007, 59 entries
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Having acquainted myself with your spiritual contentment, I wonder if it is this that prospers in your soul to offer you such joy and inner fulfilment. I sense that it is the awe and humility that you feel just to be part of this wonderful universe - hence the elusiveness of the source of inspiration for it is immeasurable, rendering a long poem of explanation superfluous. I share your "never-ending shiver" - the same flame of appreciation burns brightly in me. Of course I also recognize the personal interpretation that may mean love of one person. An interesting poem, Myra. May you always feel that shiver. Tony x
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You are a kind, generous and gentle soul, Tony. Thank you for being part of my world.
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Wow this is wonderfully detailed. beautifully written, wonderful flow of words. And it was a pleasure to read.
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how you talked about many many things in such a short piece. I love it , Myra. keep up the good work.
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This is amazing. It's short yet touches people all the same. Very well done. I love the flow of it. It's absolutely beautiful. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Kristen
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Beautiful...
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Thank you, Windsong - what a kind comment. Perhaps you find rest within my words, because we hear the same Inner Voice ... -
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Thank you, Terry - do you post all these wonderful poetical comments, Poet? -
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Thank you, Shelly ... I appreciate your comment. -
don't touch it!
i know everytime i need something beautiful to soothe my tired eyes and spirit i will find it here, within your words!
this is perfect, in form and content! -
don't touch it!
Again brilliance. Bravo -tj-
~~~~~Lone Song~~~~~
.........The tranquility.......
The songbird whistles aloud
......Within it'self proud.....
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totally flawess indeed!
an excellent write
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Thank you, Susan. I appreciate your comment. Sure. I love new poems ...
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Thank you, Gecko: you understood. :)
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don't touch it!
Flawless
Loved it
Come see me new ones up
Blessings
Susan~~ -
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:O
the P???
lol
grasping solitude
notes strung between fingers stretched
ear plucked melodies
:)
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