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eulogy

the feverish buzz of the past few days
 reached its climax and passed.
the down slope approaches--

the sky is gray with rain
soaking my coat and clothes.
a biting breeze
          penetrates me, leaving
   icicles
          on my edges.

a shattered window pane
the shards glisten in the frame,
                   and i know.
i've been here before
years and years ago
                  yes, i know.

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Written March 29th, 2005

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  • procrastinater
    March 29, 2005
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    wow,
    beautiful structure
    beautiful pain
    it's beautiful, I feel like I've been there.
    you made me feel.
    wow

    shattered window pane
    the shards glisten in the frame,
    and i know.
    i've been here before
    years and years ago
    yes, i know.


    Honestly, wow.