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Why

Accusations thrown in my face.
Hitting me like a ton of bricks.
Words that cut so deep within,
deception, and unfaithfulness.
Left there to linger in my head.

Sitting there in pure disbelief.
My blue eyes full of tears.
Asking myself
Why after all these years,
and a beautiful daughter that we share.

I don't understand.
Where did I go wrong.
What did I do to deserve all this hurt and betrayal from you.

Just take me in your arms.
Tell me its not true,
and nothing has changed between me and you.

How could I have been so blind,
so stupid, not to realize,
and the last to know that you were feeding me
nothing but lies.




You promised me the world.
That we were meant to be,
and would be forever and eternity.

Forgiveness you say,
Leave this in the past, make a new start.
Why when we already came so far.
How with nothing left to give , with nothing left in my heart.

Take all this pain you gave to me,
make it disappear, make it go away.
Look into my eyes and tell me all the reasons why.



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I didn't think it would hurt this bad.
Written March 29th, 2005

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  • Shadow Keeper
    April 4, 2005
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    hey, this is a very sad piece. although i can not relate to it personally, i can definitely feel your pain in this. i liked the way it was written and the words you have chosen for it. nice job, keep it up always!


  • BehindTheEyes
    April 2, 2005
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    This is really good. The flow is nice and I just kept reading. Thanks for entering.

  • angeledtweety
    March 30, 2005
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    great

    this is a sad one i can feel your pain,its bad enough to hurt but not to know why makes thins so much worse..this poem had me feeling your tears i hope things get better for you good luck