sun rays sneaking up
dozing off on sandy beach
soothing cold shower
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Written March 29th, 2005
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This reminds me of oncoming languid summer sun splendoured days filled with,'soothing cold shower'
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omg! I used to live in Hawaii and now I live in Germany (big change) this description makes me feel all warm and refreshed!!!!! Great job and thanx for reminding me what it's like
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The imagery here was magnificent, i almost felt as if i was with you on that sandy beach, with the sun just coming over the horizon, and baking our skin as we sit there and try to tan our skin as to justify our looks to other people. i could feel the anguish that came from within you when you said that you had to take a cold shower, for you are living under someone else's supervision, and they nag at you whenever you need something that is a burden upon them. it's like you're home, but you're not really home, if you know what i mean, what would their reaction be if they were forced to take a cold shower, so you did not use hot water so they would not have something to be upset about, you try to stray away from all conflict, but still it always arises. You shouldn't care what other people think about your complexion, why risk skin cancer just to gain the admiring stares of a couple more people. it makes me sad, this was an excellent write, and it is definitely going in my favorites list, thank you so so so so much for letting us read it, it was absolutely without words beautiful, good luck with your situation, later.
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Ya all night hehe -- this one was suppose to be deleted Oh Well!!!
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Were you out all night on the beach
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