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Duck slavery - by Pix

chicken
Splendorous chicken
they get the attention i desire
i crave
i realise how I'm just a slave

hold me back
hold me down
my frown
It Grow!
My wings, they flow
i jump off the edge
making my break for freedom
but in an instant i hit the floor
and freedom breaks me.

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Written March 29th, 2005

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  • Duck Off
    April 14, 2005
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    wether its voodoo, magic or just plain "im a magician, and if you dont beleive me, ill cut you with this amusingly shaped rock" i dont care, its all witchcraft.
    Now get out of my sight.


  • Duck Off
    April 14, 2005
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    With a small plastic wand that resembles sean connery?


  • ilovemygrape
    March 29, 2005
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    I'LL BREAK YOU