I'm aching inside, crying out
for help - Help me.
I'm not asking for sympathy
I' asking for support
- Support me
My whole body is aching now
and all you can tell me
and give me - Painkillers.
I'm crying, I'm yelling
I'm pleading - My heart, my heart
is aching
- Your solution - Painkillers
My body is getting numb and for now
the pain stops until I cry out to you
again for help
- Mommy your solution Painkillers
I hate you and your Painkillers.
All I ever wanted was you love
and support.
My heat is aching -
you give me painkillers.
This time I'll take them all.
My heart is aching.
My heart - it stopped.
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Written March 29th, 2005
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great poem. awesome. i love it. keep up the good write...
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well done great poem
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Wow wow wow wow! That is such an amazing poem. I'm kinda speechless... I wanted support and instead all I got were antidepressants; a sugar-coating for my real feelings. Drugs aren't always the answer, sometimes a hug will do so much more. Fantabulous write!
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Wow, this is really stunning. I am amazed how ell you can write in English, knowing it's not your home language. Really a emotional poem with heart. Well done!
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