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Piece of Heaven

My Heart is breaking, breaking
to pieces - over you.

My little piece of
heaven - broke loose and
shattered to pieces on a earth so cruel
a million dust specks...

Breaking, breaking over you
My piece of heaven - You.

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Please let me know what I can change.
Written March 29th, 2005

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  • Thayla
    March 29, 2005
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    Aaaahhhh this is hear breaking. I loved the repitition. Breaking, breaking. Beautifully done.