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Love and Hate

Love and Hate its all the same
eating away at my soul.

I love you, I do, until forever
But how long is forever?
Forever until how long it my last. .

You Love me - I hate you
I can't have you
Eating slowly at my soul

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Written March 28th, 2005

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  • Thayla
    March 28, 2005
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    Really great, I loved the last line. Love does seem to eat away you soul, sometimes. So this is applause for a brilliant poem with wonderful feeling. And Love and hate are truly very close indeed. Well done

  • Amandsy
    March 28, 2005
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    Thank you - one of my first.


  • Touched by an Angel
    March 28, 2005
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    Great Job

    Short but sweet with bitter!! I really liked this poem Great Work... Keep it up!!!...
    -x-Sedusha-x-