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A lovers Kiss

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Our lips meet in a lovers kiss
sending shivers of delight;
creating feelings of such bliss
continuing throughout the night.

To know the thrill of your kiss is sheer bliss.

Author notes

I read your poems.
Run away heart
and
You

Written March 28th, 2005

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  • Janice M Pickett
    November 24, 2005
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    excellent

    Gosh what an amazing picture Jenn. Did you do that in a graphics program?
    Your poem is really romantic. I gave me shivers.
    Hugs
    Jan


  • jenelda silver member
    August 6, 2005
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    Thank you shubs for your wonderful comment, it's nice to meet someone else from India, I have several friends from there now. I am from Australia. Thank you for visiting.
    Jennifer


  • shubs
    August 6, 2005
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    The image goes very well with the image depicted in the poem and the romance is romantic to say the least..well relayed..well written...you give love a profound meaning--Shubs


  • whipped rose
    April 26, 2005
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    Excellent

    This is wickedly wonderful, and entrancign for such a short poem, i liekthe kiss-bliss rhyme it is cute! Thepictures goes wonderfully with the lover's kiss idea and really adds dimension! I want an eternity of gorgeous little lover's kisses if they are anything like this poem! Congrats on a beautiful poem and i think i shall give you applaus job well done


  • Sandygram silver member
    April 12, 2005
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    AMAZING POEM

    Condratulations Jennifer on winning the silver. This was an amazing poem. Take care, Sandy


  • PurpleSky
    April 9, 2005
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    this has a sing songy feel to it. very passionate and beautiful thank you for such a lovely entry and I wish you luck in our contest
    huggles
    ~Lena~


  • jenelda silver member
    April 5, 2005
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    Thank you Sandy for your wonderful comment, it's much appreciated, Jenny

  • Sandygram silver member
    April 3, 2005
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    AMAZING POEM

    This was so beautiful. You created so much love within these five lines. Thank you for sharing. Take care, Sandy


  • jenelda silver member
    April 2, 2005
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    Thank you dear for reading my poem, I do appreciate it love Jenn


  • jenelda silver member
    April 2, 2005
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    Thanks Ed, I'm glad you like it, am just beginning to get back into the love poems again-Love Jenn


  • jenelda silver member
    April 2, 2005
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    Thanks AJ for your wonderful comment-ove Jenn


  • illusions
    March 29, 2005
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    this is lovely! i like how you repeated your rhyme in your last line. the picture is beautiful...it really adds to the piece. best of luck in the contest!

    illusions

  • Gogetalife
    March 28, 2005
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    Woow jen..sooooooooo romatic sweetheart..outstanding


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    March 28, 2005
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    This is such a beautiful poem. It's a very beautiful poem filled with such passion and love. I wish you good luck in the contest

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