When I arrived near,
your soul reached for mine,
your heart followed suit…
Our feelings of wanton desire and animal lust,
would not allow us to continue as before.
My lips want for the soft, sweet taste,
that can only be yours.
My hands yearn for the sensation of the softness,
of your skin.
The welling of desire within my groin,
wishes to enter your depths.
“Come hither” I say to you,
our lust reaches heights previously unknown.
You comply, willingly, and openly, for your lust,
equals that of my own.
Allow me, dear lady, to demonstrate with you,
the depth of our desire.
Slowly we stroll together,
in the direction of the chamber of love,
stopping several times, for an embrace,
filled with passion.
Upon our arrival, I take you into my arms,
once again, for desire fills the air;
passion fills our eyes; love fills our hearts.
As lights dim, and candles glow, the illumination,
can only be described as beauty, for in that light,
our bodies glow.
My fingers feel your bare skin, soft and supple,
my eyes wish to see more of your sensual beauty.
All outside this chamber, is forgotten;
it is as if there is no one else, but us two.
Our skin comes alive,
as our fingertips explore each other.
Our breath quickens as our desire builds
more desire for each other.
As we begin to lie together,
our kisses grow even more passionate;
our eyes become pools of flammable fluid;
to ignite each other’s flames.
Our movements quicken as the acts of love commence;
our tongues explore each other’s depths…
The hard and the soft, come together,
in depths unheard of before.
As your climax nears our bodies melt together,
as water to water.
It cannot be told where one ends and the other begins.
As each climax ensues,
desire is sated for a moment,
and passion builds again and again.
As my own climax nears,
movement becomes even more passionate.
When it arrives, yours does too, our voices reach
a height that can only mean love…
Basking in the afterglow of our love,
our movements grow still, our kisses,
once passionate, grow more and more tender.
As that subsides, our love grows once again,
slowly sleep, satisfying sleep, arrives,
our bodies
Love…
© Jonathan Wikkins October 30, 2001
Revised February 17, 2008
All Rights Reserved
Author notes
Written October 30th, 2001
In a list
A contest entry
- In Bed with you .....................over 18 please by Abe 1.
430 points, ended February 3, 2008, 13 entries
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I love the afterglow of love. You made the physical act very romantic and the background gave it a base feeling. Like that we can't love if our hearts aren't beating. Good luck.
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Hello brother you are a talented master craftman of the quill and parchment. Where the ink softly caresses the pages with "flamming fluid". Leaving the reader's mind to burst in wondrous climax. Thank you!
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masterpiece
This is beautifully written. I felt every line and it speaks volumes of passion,just what I like! Thanks for sharing! -
Basking in the afterglow of our love,
our movements grow still, our kisses,
once passionate, grow more and more tender.
As that subsides, our love grows once again,
slowly sleep, satisfying sleep, arrives,
our bodies…
Love…
this stanz says so of luv after the beauty of deed is forfilled
thanks for yr entry and gd luck
abe -
don\'t touch it
A wonderful love making session, your writes are awesome, keep up the great works here and I'll keep enjoying!!!
This was beautifully written, thanks for sharing!!! ~Smiles~
You got that special tender touch in this piece, pen on!!!
~Timothy~ -
Excellent
Very well done Im impressed -
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hahaha nice :) -Brandon -
Ok. Sorry it took so long to respond. I had to go take a cold shower. =) VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY ... erotic, sensual, tempting, and otherwise all around invitingly HOT piece. Thanks soooooooooooooo much for writing it. - Sonia
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very nice
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wow... passionate, sensual, erotic, and tasteful as well. You have amazed me again whonrock with your imagery and passion. Beautiful!
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erotic... hypnotic... chimes of flesh... fresh as the words which please my eyes...
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Loved the comments from the other 'dreamers' ....even I wouldn't be wary of this one! *smile* Very beautifully done. m
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HHOOOOTTT. Thanx.
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I really enjoyed this write....not too much though. Um, It gives a feel alomst like Anne Rice's erotic novels. You definately have a way with words, story-telling and imagry. I have on suggestion, I read the word 'depths' maybe you could replace one or two of that word with something else that has a similar meaning.
I really enjoyed 'our eyes become pools of flammable fluid;
to ignite each other’s flames. '
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'as water to water.
It cannot be told where one ends and the other begins.'
exteamly good content. Leah -
as somone put it to me recently...
you know what the difference between erotic and kinky is?
in erotic you use the feather
in kinky, you use the entire chicken...
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Very erotic, very sensual. Tastefully done. Imagination is a great thing.
Sammy -
Whew! I'll be right back to rate this one ... right after my cold shower! Sensual, erotic, poetic. Who could ask for more. Brilliant write.
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