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There are many people that have changed my life. When I was a child, my family was in pieces. My father's an alcoholic and my mother screamed at him every night he was late.

When I was in grade eight, he said that he didn't want us and then we moved into the city and they got a divorce.

I fell in love with my cousin and he was in love with me. He made me feel needed and fulfilled dreams I thought would never come true. I'm very thankful for my friends and Robert. They are my true family.

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Written March 28th, 2005

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  • Seven Kinky
    August 11

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    Hear hear! Friends are there for you when nobody else will be. I've learned over the years that friends are often truer than family. They'll stick by you and not judge you when your family will only offer you harsh words. Nice write, hun. Changes keep us on our toes and keep us from stagnating. Cheers!


  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    October 24, 2005
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    This is the only personal and reality based one I have. You read two a while back, I noticed. Thank you for your comment.

  • Elrenia
    October 24, 2005
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    Nice. I just dropped by to check out a couple of your drabbles. I did read one a while back. I just forgot to read anymore. So, now I am. Thank you for sharing.

  • KPOBb 3A KPOBb
    March 29, 2005
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    Woah. That was interesting, cuz I can relate to most of it, not really the cousin part tho...was he your first or second cousin?...anyway doesnt matter to me, as long as it's love it's all g.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    March 29, 2005
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    Every word of it is true.
    Edited on Mar 29, 10:56 p.m. because ''.

  • KPOBb 3A KPOBb
    March 29, 2005
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    hmmm...very interesting. One question tho, is this a true story about you or is it fiction?...anyway just wondering cuz it sounds very interesting--in a good way tho.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    March 29, 2005
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    Thank you for your comment, though if I put any more detail into this piece, it would no longer be a drabble, since drabbles are only 100 words long.

  • gothchyld
    March 29, 2005
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    I like this so much as well - a rare topic, and I am sure with graphic imagery you can surely twist it into an irrestistable tale.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    March 29, 2005
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    I always keep the ones I love close to me...I try to be strong, but my friends are much stronger than I am. I've always wished that I was stronger. Thank you for commenting.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    March 29, 2005
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    Drabbles are very short stories that are no longer than 100 words long and no shorter. That's what they are, but they can be about anything. I don't know, but I just like writing them. Maybe it's because it's another form. I like writing form poetry. Thank you for your comment.

  • March 29, 2005
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    I love that picture, for soem reason.
    Slash i really dont get the point of Drabbles. *doesnt even know what they are* <.<; Short story type things? Um, anyway. Although drabbles dont really appeal to me, i admire writers of them because they have a way to fit a whole story into so few words. Something I take pages and pages to do.

  • Princess Muse silver member
    March 29, 2005
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    Adversity in life can either break us or make us strong...You have become so strong because of everything even though you don't always like to believe it...Robert has been so wonderful for you...Know those who love you and embrace them...Life will take care of the rest...
    Love Tory-your AP mom

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    March 28, 2005
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    Thanks honey. All fixed.
  • Silhouetted Angel
    March 28, 2005
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    I'm very thankful for me friends and Robert

    i think you mean my friends and Robert... Wonderful honey. I love you

    ~Angel ♥

  • GauArrowny
    March 28, 2005
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    I am glad I could be there for you. I guess in the end, we helped one another. You are a wonderful person and if I didn't think it so useless, I'd make her see how wonderful you really are.
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