I want to open my days with you,
I yearn to see you smile,
when skating, fall down, take you too,
and lay there for a little while...
I love to gaze into your eyes,
fall into open arms,
and know I'll never hear those lies
never hear those awful alarms...
I lay at night and think of you,
impossible is sleep,
praying, one day, to say I love you,
and look into your eyes so deep...
when you were there and held me tight,
my heart skipped a beat,
you make it hard for me to write,
your company's sweet...
I always held my feelings back,
for fear I'd soon screw up,
It's posted on my face, SMACK!
innocent as a pup...
you know who this poems 'bout
...I love you...
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i chose choice 2
I commented on: 'Like a Tree' by: Sherry, 'To Braden' by:Sarah957, 'Am I Good Enough' By: Redbeard3x2
commented + applauded: 'My Heart Dies Slowly' by: Sherry, 'A Day I'll Never Forget" by:LiquidEmotions
Written March 28th, 2005
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AWWWWWWWWWWWw this is really sweet. I think you have done an amazing job with this write. I think that you put a lot of thought into it and I like that. Thank you for following my rules and for entering my contest. I wish you the best of luck!
Casey -
Beautifuly written a good poem you must love him a lot shows how much he really means in your life thanks for ya comments.....
Sherry
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A beautiful poem with emotion and passion!!
You have painted a good picture of your 'Him'.
Good luck in the contest!
manoj -
wow this is beautiful, your truly lucky to have someone like this in your life, by your poem you let the everyone see a little bit of him, you did a great job, good luck in the contest!!
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well.. i wrote this when we were dating. we're not anymore... but we're still great friends. we can even like.. finish each others' sentences on occasion.. it's cool, and slightly creepy, but fun.
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sweet
sounds like you got a good guy...and his comment totally tied together the poem great job -
~smile~ I think your intended audience approves of this. What more can you ask for? You told it straight from the heart and honesty is so seducing. Keep up the good work!
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very sweet love poem. quite touching.
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*gulp* I am speachless after reading this.. But i am going to have to write an even better poem about you to top it off.. I love you too Amanda.. If i havent told you this already i will now.. Your the one girl i have never been scared around.. I feel sofree with you.. But i freeze up when im with other girls.. Thats gotta be something there.. Weve known each other for a very long time.. And im glad you are in my life.. I love you so much Amanda!! So much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *jumps on her* Lol..
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Wow! Justin is a really great guy, (I am his AllPoetry bro' if ya' didn't know.) You sound like such a great person from the things that he has told me. The two of you sound perfect for one another. I can only imagine he is going to feel very loved when he reads this.
Justin
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