Listen very carefully
you hear it everywhere,
in the robin's song,
singing in the air.
Heard in the laughter,
as the children play,
so carefree and happy,
on this spring,time day.
The clap of thunder,
an echoing sound,
the rustling of leaves,
swirling all around.
April showers falling,
like crystal teardrops,
beads of condensation,
go plop, plop, plop.
The babbling brook,
is soothing to hear,
sounds of the season,
are music to my ears.
Bees make honey,
buzzing can be heard,
chirping in the trees,
sounds of baby bird.
The church bells ring,
time to stop and pray,
God created the beauty,
heard on this spring day
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Written March 28th, 2005
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem and leave a wonderful comment. Take care, Sandy
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Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!
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Thank you for encouraging me. I am glad you like it. It wasn't that great but it was how I felt about spring and kept it simple for the childrens catagory. There is not enough poetry on here fpr parents to read to the younger children. So I didn't care if it was a great poem. Thank you for being encouraging. I love ya. Sandy
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Awww Sandy!! This is just so tenderly perfect!! So wonderful to hear
I love the words and the imagination you have!! So creative!! For this is definitely what Spring Season brings and it just makes your soul jump up and down for joy!! WooHoo!! That is beautiful!! I always love how you write with so much love and heart God has definitely blessed you beyond you will ever know I love you my friend!!
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Thank you for the nice comment. I think we are all glad spring is here. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you so much Annie. Hope all is well with you. Hope you enjoyed your Easter weekend. I want the springto stay. No more snow please!! I will get to your poems as soon as I get caught up. It seems I fall further behind. I was so happy, yesterday Jacob and Beth (who like each other) both asked me to adopt them and ne their AP mom. That made me feel great. So I did. Take care my wonderful friend. And thank you so much for the sweet comment you left on Melanies poem. I was so toughed by the poem and your comment. God Bless you. Sandy
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Thank you for the wonderful comment. I am glad you enjoyed. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you for the nice comment. I appreciate it. Take care, Sandy
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Hi there Steff, I know how busy you are and don't mind at The only thing that I miss is hearing from you. It was great to talk on saturday. I am so glad things are a little better for you. I love you Steff. Take care of yourself. Love, Sandy
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Beautiful!
Oh I love this! Spring is so wonderful! Not quite looking like Spring where I live, but it is slowly coming!
Wonderful write!
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This is a great poem which I liked a lot I liked the description here and the sense of innocence, this was really good Another thing which I enjoyed is the rhyme and natural imagery- and as always you wrote a poem with great spiritual passion, the Holy Spirit inspires you so well and I’m glad you share your gift with us
All the best,
God bless,
Pozo
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Sandy, as always, beauty through your eyes and pen to the reader, very sweet and lovely, in the end you never forget who gave us this glorious beauty always touching my heart! God bless you sweet friend, Love, Annie
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hey man beautifully descirbed ..though simple anf in freestyle but it really gives a nice spring picture
I like few sentences of the poem which gives a nice effect!!
The clap of thunder,
an echoing sound,
beads of condensation,
go plop, plop, plop.
keep going!!!
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Simple but effective Sandy.
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Oh, Sandy! I haven't commented on your poems in forever, never the less read them (and for that i'm oh so very sorry. I've been extremely busy!) But what a great poem to start me off reading once again. You, as I have said a million times and will say a million more, are a very talented writer! I love spring time! All except the thunder storms, those tend to scare me just a tad =) Love ya, Sandy. Yet another fabulous write!
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