What can i do to change whats going on.
What can I do to have my way?
I have to make up my mind.
Go back to my past or let it be.
Take a different route ?
maybe I'll see.
Theres not much to say when your confused ,
lost, battered and brused.
Is there someone willing to help?
Please PLEASE
Help
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Written March 28th, 2005
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weee tis gr8
this is really good (thanks for commenting on mine btw XD ) i know exactly how you feel if u want help im me nd ill give u my e-mail -
First of all, thank you for commenting on my poem!
Now, I can't tell you how many times I have felt the same exact way as you have brought across in this poem. I'm supposed to be grown up and know what to do with my life, right? Wrong! I can't tell you how many times I have second guessed the decisions I've made before I even took any action!
I can't help you with what you're feeling, except to comfort you with the thought that this won't be the only time you'll be thinking you're lost!
Only one suggestion for you in this poem. In line 5, the word is spelled "bruised" instead of "brused".
Overall, a very good write. Thank you for being a part of this site, and thank you for sharing! -
My "Change Your World" might help. Feeling confused, wondering it would have been better if you had taken a different course. Certainly, that would have been different.
Thanks for reading and commenting on love.
Andy
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