i leaked the venom of lonliness
and sprawled my darkened blood
on withered flowers
í covered my soul with blackness
i carried the mirror of my tainted heart
scartched with pain
my tears streamed from the light of my shades
i gazed at your eyes ; carving the past
and unburdening the blast to burry me alive
in horror and treach of zombies
the curse crossed the moon
the GRUDGE pierced the pale night
the trauma, i pleaded to be ceased, has
returned into the days of fears
my nightmares kneeled to broken faith
my kinght sealed the myth of luv with candles
pleading the death of his beloved soul
would make him repent and forget my face
yet the torture reached the verge of immortality
he couldnt take a breathe as he weeped
in silence and became a pawn of death
the water flooded with anger
the ground quaked and victims arose the throne of luv
my thorn was kept in my tainted heart
as i saught for my other half...
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AM BROKEN..am nothin and am LOST..miss u simmi the miserable..miss my self...see u ..its been a while..miss u all..plzz comment..
Written March 28th, 2005
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hiiii there..thanks alot for your comment and sorry because i wasn't able to reply sooner but my country was in WAR..
..anyway i really appreciate your comment and am glad that you liked it..hope to talk to you soon..
little sousou
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Hey. This was a great piece.
Lots of emotion which made it more of an original and enjoyable to read.
I hope You're okay and everythin goes well.
Keep smiling and take care
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hey bombaster...thnks alot for the support and i really appreciate ur help..am speechless...hope someday i canmake it thru the light and see u soon..bye 4 now..
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sousou u can kill all those zombies and u can stop the nigtmares just by searching for the joy of live and see tha sun that kills those underground createars ( fear ) search for people who fears to see u cryin it is a great poem i wish i'll be like u someday
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hey Spear..chei chei.thnks for the comment..i apprecaite it.well am nt tht lillll and i wouldnt be considered lilll cos am 17 and 1/2
..but my friends over here call me little sousou ..c u..speechless..
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A flood of raw emotions! Thats the best way I can describe this. I like the fact that you write straight from the heart. Could use some tweaking here and there but overall a very powerful write. I truly was taken aback by the vivid imagery you portray.
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hey Sousou ,thx , i mean i try everything i mean all way anything u think about i travel i .. i... then am not happy but thx god i found my solt in the faith hope from u to understand . dont worry i'll try to call u and talk t u soon calm down start again and keep ur head up ur special i mean it becarefull to ur self and t ur study pLz dont wast ur time and if u need anything just tell me As i can wish u the best this is ur last year in your school i hope so .am happy when i see u smile on ur face .
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hey ramez..thnks alot for the comment..i really appreciate it..i didnt get the last couple of lines.am sorry..so far am ok..i was jst feelin down and hopefully everythin will b eok..c u ..thnks again..lilll sousou
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wish u heal hope so ,i'll pary for u , u need something truth about ur self , and know who loves u for real and scare about u , then try to search about some if u lost it , and to ur self not any one , sorry abt this comment , Cover ur self from a bad
thing , u have the virtue try to catch it in ur solt , u know the true way , plz dont go with another one , i wish for u to do the best and take u from ur illusion to the real world without pain with beautifull life i dont mean life with me or not with me i just wanna tell something very important all for me 1st then for u and all the salvation and liberation is from the faith i know this place is wrong to write here but " the future for the faith try to search for it ..
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