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No One Can Compare

Missing image
My happiness begins with you sweetheart
stars in the sky cannot compare with you,
the lovers I have known right from the start
no longer exist I bid them adieu.

I have found my true soul mate in this life.



Author notes

This is actually a new post, but I accidently added it as an ordinary poem, didn't want to delete it as I did not want to lose the lovely comment that was left.Jen

I have read.."perhaps it's far to early to reveal" Arabian Jewel
"Neverending" Poetryality
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Written March 28th, 2005

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  • shubs
    August 6, 2005
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    short precise concise....a well drafted essay of love..romance..mystic..the picture doing justice to the whole panorama.....Shubs


  • PurpleSky
    April 9, 2005
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    very simple and reads like a heartfelt letter to someone. thank you for taking the time to enter our contest and I wish you luck.
    huggles
    ~Lena~


  • jenelda silver member
    April 8, 2005
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    Hi Vic, how are you my young friend, ummmm how's your foot? got it back yet? I understand your point Vic, I guess am inclined to write from the heart, but hey, that's a good thing, as that's the way I am Love to you, well sometimes, just kidding, just kidding, honest I am~Jenni

  • jenelda silver member
    March 28, 2005
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    Thanks Ed,
    Feel free to use it anytime you want-Jenn


  • eternalpoet
    March 28, 2005
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    3 stars ***

    SMALL BUT MEANINGFUL ( just like ME ) .. haha .. well then, you have related your love with poerful things and still your true love comes out stronger, but i know you, and i know, that your love, yeah, YOUR love, for any damn thing or being cannot be compared coz you love them with heart open.. .. i hope i was able to make you understand my point.. just keep it up dear jenni.. take cares and have a nice time my dear friend.. your humble little friend.. .. ... ..... - vic ( who else?)


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    March 28, 2005
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    wow... This is very beautiful and powerful poem I love the picture in which you put with the poem. It adds so much to it. Good luck in the contest


  • poetryality silver member
    March 28, 2005
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    OH! I do understand and relate to each and every word written here. This is so very beautiful and such a special tribute to the one you love. Very nicely written with pitched emotions and exact rhymes. Good luck in this challenge. Every poem I have read thus far, especially yours, is going to make this a hard one to judge.

    Renee ♥


  • iamfromabove
    March 28, 2005
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    Jenn that was so good and powerful. Excellent job. best of luck in the contest Love Mia


  • Lapis Lazuli
    March 28, 2005
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    This is an amazing poem! So much emotion expressed in such few words! The image compliments it beautifully aswell! My favourite line is 'stars in the sky cannot compare with you' because it shows how powerful love really is. A brilliant write. Excellent!

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