with a knife in hand
she starts to wonder if it's right
the end of life is in plain sight
just a quick pull
it will all be done
and now she knows
that life is not fun
she took the blade
cut down to the bone
and after this
her true purpose was shown
death was the trail
she was meant to follow
because she was born
and lived so hollow
her life fades away
time ticks slowly by
as she whispers to say
my life was not meant to be
but this was something
i could never see
the last words that dripped
that came from her mouth
the only words of truth
death didn't come quickly
it took its sweet time
lost in a traumatic spell
she began to regret going to this hell
falling to her knees
her heart fell apart
subtly she began to cry
as her freedom slowly walked by
her eyes grew dim
and her smile so slim
nothing could make her smile
because she was left all alone
after being helped all the while
she decided people were a waste
and it was made with haste
rising up from her grave
she shines now in her place
because she rid the world
of all the walking waste
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Written March 27th, 2005
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I had to applaud your work because this was fantastic. I really like this poem. I got so many emotions from this poem that I don't even know where to begin. I can't put them in words.
Good job.
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Nice background... I must say thats the first thing that caught my eye, very cool. This poem was really good, very dark I must say, but none the less very good. I like it. You did a good job. Pen on.
sonya -
i like it and it goes well with the backround
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thanks so much for the input. in return for your reading my poem i will read a few of yours.
thanks again
Emily -
i like ur poem its so hard to learn things in an easy way because its hard to listen to ppl you have to find out ur own way liek in this poem after she did it she fell to her knees its hard to go throw life but we all have to do it.
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