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You are my inspiration


build a bridge to my mind
you take me there every time
you inspire me when things go wrong
you are in my mind when things take so long

when i skate i think of you
there is no limit to what i can do
when thinking of you
you are my light
my sunshine
your always there
for were ever i turn
for whatever i learn
you are there for me to love
you are my dove
you inspire me.

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Written March 26th, 2005

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  • Neon Highway
    April 6, 2005
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    I have enough slaves WA HA. jOKES, i think tis cough , i'll just IM you


  • Fortune
    April 6, 2005
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    who do u think it about if u get it right i will be your slave for one school day

  • Neon Highway
    April 6, 2005
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    oooooooooooooooo lovey dovey. I can guess who it's about. HA HA HAA HA HA AHA

  • SixPennyGirl
    April 2, 2005
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    ok woah dont have a go @ me here i wos simply telling you how i enterpreted the poem.

    rae x x


  • Fortune
    April 2, 2005
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    it has nothing to do with skateboarding i dont like skateboarding
    im an skater with blades but nice quess


  • Bettyboop24
    April 1, 2005
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    Awwww....lol..i agree with SixPennyGirl . . . Are we right?! ... If not then...again..Awwww Keep it up, great stuff X

  • SixPennyGirl
    March 29, 2005
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    i reckon its ur skateboard or something cos of the line
    'when i skate i think of you'
    cos if the board is under you then obviously you have to think of it!!!
    anyways some nice ryhming in this so congrats!!!
    Rae x x

  • Neon Highway
    March 28, 2005
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    ooooo! la dee da!

  • Momentaryhappiness
    March 28, 2005
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    So what is closest to ur heart??

  • Fortune
    March 28, 2005
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    i cant tell u who or what

  • Neon Highway
    March 28, 2005
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    yeah who's it for


  • Fortune
    March 27, 2005
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    anything inpsires me . what i see, what i feel, what i do
    but what really inspires me is what is closest to my heart
    having a great easter i hope
    love lotsluke
    Edited on Mar 27, 1:42 p.m. because ''.

  • Momentaryhappiness
    March 27, 2005
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    This is a really good write Luke. So full of emotion and so heartfelt. It flows really well. If only we could all have an inspiration like you. (Who is it?)
    Good write, good luck in the contest.
    Keep it up.
    Dani xx

  • RainAndRoses
    March 26, 2005
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    Good

    Aww, I liked this a lot. There are some great rhymes in there, and it flows so nicely, and seems so raw. Good job on this one, and good luck in the contest!


  • Neon Highway
    March 26, 2005
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    build a bridge to my mind
    you take me there every time

    That was an amazing line. It must be great inspiration This was an amazing poem luke! Loved it. Great entry!

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