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Coincidence Coins



Four coins in this particular fountain... Enjoy !


Coincidence II  ... Flash Point


One wonders if coincidence can claim,
to substitute itself for Fate, - why pick
THAT flash point splash which lit love’s candle wick
or inflight insight felt, spelt feelings’ flame ?
Are these just fantasies [h]our needs inflame ?
What’s in a memory that seems to stick
to instincts, thoughts, remains through thin and thick,
alters the rules which score more mundane game,
tinting glasses to transform eye’s aim
Present, Past, the same.  Here second sight can t[r]ick,
repeat, replay fey meeting  ~  double click.
Threading maid man,  man maid, from screen to frame
‘imagOnation’s’ writs two wits re[s]t[r]ain
within shared motions no emotions feign.





©  Jonathan Robin sonnet written 28 September 1997 and 26 March 2005



Coincidence



Coincidence is seen when into place
life slips its puzzle pieces for a time.
Awareness grows.  Beneath another clime -
which still seems hidden - we met face to face.
Can dreams thread unseen signals, interlace
existence past and present, future, climb
consciousness’s barriers to rhyme
light and laughter, bright hereafter trace,
and karmic correspondance interface ?
Unique potential ? Human pantomime,
denies the base that smothers in its slime ~
Eternity awaits shared choice unchased.
‘Chance’ can catalyze twin hearts to grow
together, perfect symbiosis know.




©  Jonathan Robin sonnet written 27 April 1989 and 21 October  1996


Coincidence as Catalyst


Coincidence as catalyst
leading into a karmic dance
evolving patterns - ambiance
calls bluff, wins all, masks fall, dismissed.

Consciousness disperses mist,
encouraging, as, at a glance,
fresh vistas thread entente’s advance,
discover no need to resist.

Empathy, by Chance is kissed,
neither through insouciance
nor focus finds renaissance
spurred as joys enhanced minds’ tryst.                             

Osmosis, ever optimist, -
though ’Know thyself’ -  mind fer de lance
incisive, spurning nonchalance,
expands, through ego would persist.

But harmony the egotist 
overcomes, and yearns to rise
exploring daily fresh surprise,
emotions  Chance’s catalyst.



©  Jonathan Robin written 30 June 1995 and  5 October 2005



Cusps Converge


Cusps converge then redivide.
Unsuspected they conceal
Symphonic links Time may reveal
Perchance some day as tune inside
Subtle riddles read.  Who’d ride
Concentric ripples round Fate’s wheel,
ON key, in tune with Future’s weal ?
Vain mankind has often tried
Effect and Cause to link, provide
‘Real’ explanations for Life’s spiel –
Gust on Time’s breeze Death, Past, fast seal –
Ephemeral both ebb and tide.

Cusps connected can’t collide,
Unique the rule to school, unreel
Silk threads which, slippery as eel,
Prepare tomorrow far and wide,
Set patterns spinning which abide,
Chaos kept on even keel, …
ONe law – or flaw – none can repeal.
Vision peripheral aside
Each should Cause search and not deride
Response-reaction’s ceaseless meal
Ground by and from Fate too few feel.
Effect ?  - Coincidence’s bride !
Still stays writ, fit lock for Time’s sandy wall,
Will, Ways, Wit, knit knock, door, key, rhymes, and all ...




8 March 2005


©  Jonathan Robin double acrostic sonnet written 27 April 1989 and 21 October  1996

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  • loved this alot. :]
  • I am not worthy!!

    Thank You!! I need a cigarette!! That is what I am talking about!!! This is one of the only forms I still haven't mastered..(bows)....

  • Lily otv
    January 17

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    As a numismatist I found unique value in each of these four coins. Education is always of great value and these poems educated me in many ways, not least being that I had to look up ‘insouciance’ and ‘fer de lance’ in the third poem, thus expanding my vocabulary once again. I found the real meaning for me in this poem was in the line “Consciousness disperses mist” as every thing else stems from that. The rhyme schemes are interesting in each poem and I know myself how difficult it can be to use so few end syllable sounds when writing a complete work. This is where an expanded vocabulary plays an essential part to produce a poem of interest instead of one of monotonous boredom.

    In the first poem I like the word play created by the use of parenthesis because I think it adds another dimension to reading as each word influences the poem in its own way. I prefer the second poem for the musical tone when read out loud. Although I found general and personal meaning in this poem I had a problem interpreting the line “Human pantomime, / denies the base that smothers in its slime.” After reading the fourth poem and in particular the line “Cusps connected can’t collide” I feel it is an explanation of the others, or a reasoning of them, though I could be wrong. I admit the last line lost me lol.

    I enjoyed reading all four poems but the second sonnet is the one I found most appealing. I think we sometimes look for reasons to things that happen to us or around us when it is nothing more than coincidence at play. If we look at how often we repeat certain actions then probability has to be on the side of coincidence.

    I am not surprised you won a gold trophy for these poems

  • Virgoan
    October 13, 2007

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    Congratulations

    Interesting. I like the depth of this piece.

    Thanks for sharing and Keep writing.

    VIRGOAN


  • brightredtulips
    October 13, 2007

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    This is really interesting. I loved reading it. You truly have penned a lovely piece here. Keep it up.
    Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.

    ~kate

  • RatherImaginative silver member
    August 28, 2007

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    This is an intriguing way to fashion the sonnet for your own use. The picture they paint is fascinating, and I especially enjoyed the different meanings brought out by the stratigically placed brackets. However, only the first to pieces really fit what I'm asking for in this contest, and even those don't quite follow the rhyme scheme required. The meter for the most part in those two is quite good, though. Thanks so much for entering my contest!

  • Night Hope gold member
    April 20, 2005
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    Well, of course you're 'out of mainstream literary trends', my Friend...ya got a whole ocean of your own!!! hehehe What's vogue is not necessarily in style, my Friend...your style never goes out of date...LOVED this line of your comment: 'It does however facilitate pluridimensial references without undue cynicism ' LOL Ahhh, such fun you are, Scribe!!! Wanda

  • Cynicism101
    March 26, 2005
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    I really like the use of brackets to make new words (which also seems the hip thing to do if you're an English professor writing a paper and need a fancy title) - it adds a weird but cool postmodern feel to the very old sonnet form.

  • Night Hope gold member
    March 26, 2005
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    'I wonder if coincidence can claim,
    to substitute itself for Fate, ~ why pick
    THAT flash point splash that lit love’s candle wick
    which inflight insight felt, spelt feelings’ flame ?'


    Beautiful, Jonathan...I don't think there is such a thing as coincidence, as I told you...I think it's undiscovered Destiny...but then, I remain an optimist in spite of, or because of, experience...hehehe I'm enjoying the Path, my Friend... Wanda

  • Duana gold member
    March 26, 2005
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    I love how you lead us to other poems of the same theme. I should link my poems in such a way. By the way, if you leave out the http:// and replace it with www. it should then be a link we can click on and it will take us write to the poem...I think anyway....that's what I have done before.

    Anyway, this is another great poem. I am not sure if I agree with it though. I think this poem represents the thought processes and interpretation we give to coincidences when they occur, but for me, they have always led to disillusionment, and thus leading me to think coincidences are nothing more than 'glitches' in complex systems Or something like that. But your poems sure are thought provoking....and are making me revisit the whole idea of coincidence.
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