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craving

You said you wanted someone to be crazy over who's crazy over you well here I am. I'll wait for a life time if that's what it takes for you to see how much I care. I try and not spill it out to him. Though my eyes spill the tears. Wishing I could reach out and hug him close and tell him just how I feel but that's not going to happen right now. So I'll hold on with my heart and wait tell the end of time to see your eyes shine. Even if I cry and brake down waiting. Your worth it and so much more. I'll tell you every time we talk your special because to me you are in so man ways. I could list all I love about you but I'd run out of lead and paper trying to get it all down. So for now I can only say you melt my heart and make me cry at the same time. I just long to have you near and touch you pull you in so close you can feel my heart race with your's and tell you that I long to make you happy. I also wish to tell more but I keep it to myself until that day  For now I'll long and dream of you trough the lonely nights. As long as your happy I'm complete. Though deep within craving all that is you.

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I can get lost in your eyes and speak these words from the deepest depths of my heart.
Written March 25th, 2005

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  • The Pipers Call
    March 26, 2005
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    nice work, deeply meaningful
    you might want to format it a little neater though, so it will be all the more powerful


  • Lovely Luci
    March 26, 2005
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    BlackWidow is right. Cry and wallow in the pools of despair all around you, but then towel off and walk on out and into the throes of the world. Pain is all right to feel, but it isn't worth it to preserve the pain and take it out over and over to look at it and to feel it. It just ain't worth it.


  • bw43
    March 26, 2005
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    you should give it to him. why...? that way you'll know if there is a chance. if there isn't, then you can feel happy that you gave it to him because no you won't waste all eternity thinking about him. instead, you will cry.... for a while. be sad. but then get over it because you'll realize he was never worth it. on the other hand, positively speaking, perhaps he feels the same way too and is just shy... so go for it... either way... you are better off.