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Feel It Too

THeres days that i sit
cold and alone
im breaking down and
no one knows

we all hide from ourselves
we all sit down and cry
so why do you act
like everthings all right

i know your secrets
and i know your truth
you cant hide your pain
cuz i feel it too

Everyone has there moments in time
everyone questions and wonders why
we all ponder the thoughts and the lines
would anyone cry if I accidentaly died

Author notes

UMm.... I dont kNOW!!!!
Written March 25th, 2005

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  • ThatAmazingFeeling
    July 11, 2005
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    Honest, Balanced, Wonderful

    Beautiful..it's about the truth of depression and loneliness. Some people are annoyed to read things about depression and loneliness (myself included), and some just eat it up (those are the ones that write the annoying stuff), but this is a good balance. Portrays pain without asking for pity. It shows those that feel lonely that they are not alone and those that avoid it that it's true.


  • PhurgawtiN
    April 17, 2005
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    good write. Its sad without being sad, and its about depression sorta. well.. if you look at it that way. but the poem is generally fun to read.

  • OvrTheRainbow
    April 4, 2005
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    Thankies myyches..sigh


  • falling curtain
    March 30, 2005
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    Wow! i really loved this poem, It's so true that everyone thinks about it, and I love the way this poem has captured this thought without being overly depressing!! well done