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One Life to Live

They said the funeral was nice,
Quiet hymns in a crowded room.
Tears were shed atop the casket,
The flowers were in bloom.

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I know this is rubbish, sorry I cannot do better for you.
Rest in peace, Dr. Carrol, we miss you.
Written March 25th, 2005

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  • HeWillAlwaysBeAFool
    March 25, 2005
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    This is really sweet. Great job! I'm sorry about your loss
    ~Sarah