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Dear God ( a letter for Rob)

Dear God,
Help him through this time.Yet I know he doesn't beleive in you,but i know he needs you.He has the chance to be sombody, please don't let him thow it away. I am happy he has quit his drinken. He needed to.Me and Cheyna love him so much.
      Jessica
     Take a little moment
     To forget about everythoing
     And pray for him
     He needs yall the most.
     This is for Rob
     Give him the chance
     To let him in your life.
The kid with the dyed hair.
Earings.
His dad shut him out.
Don't want him in his house.

Dear God,
He hit him again.
Real hard.
He's got a black eye.
He took up for his mom.
And his dad wouldnt take it
Rob loves his mom with all his heart.
Please don't let it happen again.
His home is broken.
In a world where no one cares for him,
No one is there...
So why should he care?
 


       I love you Rob,
    Jessica and Cheyna

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Written March 24th, 2005

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  • candyecane2002
    July 7, 2005
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    wow

  • lil horse
    April 9, 2005
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    great

    good this is good . also good that he stood up for his mom i hope Rob is ok
    alicia


  • -Tainted- LOoVe
    March 25, 2005
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    Jessica! I love this, and I feel so bad for Rob (my boyfriend) I pray for him every night and I wish God would help him. I try and try and it isn't helping and i love him so much and you know that and he just won't listin to my point of view and I don't want him to go to Hell, So pray and pray hard! -Love and peace- Chey-


  • Sugarclock
    March 24, 2005
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    this is sweet, very well written.. great write.. great job.. hope things work out for Rob