Now I lay me down to die
I pray the Lord no one will cry
I know this was a painful choice to make
So I pray to God no hearts will break
Now you lay me in the grave
I pray the Lord you will be brave
I know this is hard to do
So I pray that God will be with you
Now you lay upon the dirt
I pray the Lord will take your hurt
As one sad rose marks where I lie
I scream at God and ask him why
Now you lay upon your bed
Gun now loaded to your head
Tears fell quickly down your face
Oh so sad you left this place
Now you lay in your own death
I pray the Lord to give you breath
But all he said was “it’s his fate
And your prayer for him has come to late”
Now I fall upon my knees
I close my eyes and beg God please
But all he does is sadly say
“I cannot give him another day”
Now I die once again
For I have lost you to my same sin
Author notes
hope u like it 
avec amour *~Krymsin Kyss~*
Written March 24th, 2005
A contest entry
- lover's suicide by Trueloveneverdies.
300 points, ended November 30, 2005, 23 entries
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omg this poem is soooooooooo awesome!!!!!! its amazing...
i loved it...you took the prayer thing and turned it around
good job!!! amazing... -
This one sent chills thru me!!! Very powerful and well done.
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Wow! Powerful words. I really got taken by it.
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God Abby!!! This is beautiful..it left me speechless!
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