Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

I want you back so bad

I want you back so bad
All these feelings in a jumble
I'm always sad or mad
My life is always in a crumble
I am still wishing you were here
No one to tell secrets too
No one to hold to me near
Remember when we watched the dew
Early in the morning
Then went for a early swim
They all had their warning
That you were hanging on the brim
But my love only grew
And our relationship starting
Then the candles you blew
And then you were carted
Right down that row
You told me not to come
That I was to remember your face aglow
That your life was just a crumb
And that I had better things to live for
We had it all planned though
And now I am ripped to the core
I have fallen below
I have turned into a hidden bump
Please just speak to me just once more
And I don't know how to get back up - - - -


Author notes


Written March 24th, 2005

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)