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i see me as you see me:
a soul wearing flesh
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Pleading my undressed Soul ...
Written October 20th, 2002
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sudden shock by eyes
i see me as you see me:
a soul wearing flesh
sudden shock by eyes
a good opening line my friend, i love that emoticon, any opportunity to use it is good in my book.
i see me as you see me:
sudden awarness eh, it is good isn't it?
aha! yes! thank you
a soul wearing flesh
we may peek with the mouth that turns upwards into a smile, we may peek with words in poetry and artwork splashed about, but those eyes, They do not peek, they laugh bursts of the spirit right across time and space
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The flesh is just that wrapping we were given as a gift when we emerged and screamed our breath of joy, of pain to wander through time. Pupils wide, the eyes register other's vision. Wonderful.
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Connor: in the eyes of the 'believer'? LOL :) Hugs.
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Shelly thank you for the comment ... I love your work, too.
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excellent
you see the glow as well?
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great depth
nice aNd complex
i truly enjoyed
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Oh Gecks!
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dressed i am naked
born here I have my reprieve
buried and still alive
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Thank you, Patrice ... we do think alike, don't we? Hugs. -
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Ah my dear Myra......... this is so well said. It's a pleasure to see your wonderful spirit at work............ and growing. Thanks for sharing your spiritual side.
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don't touch it!
loved this Myra, as always! -
Apparition - oh! What an uplifting quote! Max Lucado voiced my own determination ... Thank you for putting a cushion under my knees ... Hugs.
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Thank you, Terry, for the accurate observation ... :)
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Brazos ... so true ... Thank you for reading ... :)
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Thanks for reading, Donnz - you may have a different view. Answer? nope - children of God. ;)
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Thank you for reading, Ivy Rose :)
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Myra, this is so perceptive and revealing. This IS how God sees us. Brings to mind a quote from Max Lucado that I ran across just today. 'I refuse to let what will rot, rule the eternal. It is under the heading of 'self control' from his book 'When God Whispers Your Name.'
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An open and visible image. One of fallibility. Great work -tj- -
don't touch it!
And, might I add, when all our flesh has rotted away, we still have our eternal souls. Wonderful write, Myra. -
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If only we could___
See beyond Plastic facade___
Old Children? Or God?
( You still write beutifully, I obviously have a different view~)LoL -
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WOW!!! This is deep, intense... So much truth in this 3 line Haiku, so much beauty in the way you wrote this. ***Ivy Rose -
LOL@Gill ... Yes, I am amused by the way Bill portraits you, you cute little Nursie ;)
I try to do that, though - to understand what people see when they look at me ... But: I cannot say it helps THEM to understand me LOL
Thanks for reading ... This one goes with the other one - 'Naked'
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Thank you for commenting, Bill. The older I get, the more I move into a spiritual realm. I've been there all my life - we all are - but I become progressively involved in a 'sorting out' mode ... Then suddenly I am confronted with reality, and I realize people are seldom involved, or interested in your private (inner) conversations ... :) I guess it is a communication gap ...
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Thank you, Shadid. The last few days I again realized that one have to carry a body through this world ... to be naked soul, is hurtful sometimes ... and lonely. And sometimes I do forget to put on my body ...
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Myra... this is beautiful... It made me stop and think..wow!!! seeing yourself as other's see you... amazing..~~~GILL~~~ -
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We are not perfect and to realise this for the first time is dethroning but at the same time is the first step on the ladder to heaven. -
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wow!!! oooooooooooooooh.. Deep message... I love these... I love these kinda stuff what everyone can relate it with their life.... So much diverse meaning can be understood from this. Thank you myra..
love
Shadid
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