Your eyes red rimmed
Shaking from the coffee to stay awake
There were nights you cried
Not knowing how much more of motherhood you could take
I know you sometimes felt
That you failed as a mother
But honestly mom
I wouldn't trade you for any other
I admire your strength
And your gentle touch
I admire how you keep going
Though your tasks are way too much
You're my mom when I cry
A shoulder for me to rest
But the times when you were more my friend
I cherish the best
I don't think any woman
Could be a better mom than you
So for all the times you've been there
I wanna say thank you
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Written March 24th, 2005
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Lol that sounds good. I might read the book when it comes out
anyways i think you should let them put it in their book because it will be worth shopwing of your amazing talents.
katy
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thank you :-) i already have someone who wants to use it in a book he's writting :-)
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Wow this is just so brilliant!! I am sure every mother in the world or mothers who read this can relate to it in some way or another. It was heartwarming, powerful and full of emotion. Great write and well done. Keep writing!
katy
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I found this to be amazing. Though I haven't given birth to any of my children and they are all so close to my age (my AP children) you have really touched me. This how I appreciate my AP Mama and how I hope my children feel when they think of me. YOu did wonderful!
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aw, thanks :-)
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thanks, yeah, she cried when i read it to her.
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This was lovely. And I give you so much credit for writing this sweet thing for your mother, instead of an angry ranting or complaint. This made me smile.
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Oh sweetie, I have tears in my eyes, what beautiful words from your heart...being a mom, this is so touching to me, you are truly an angel
you mom must adore this! All the best, much love, Annie 
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yeah, i love my mom :-)
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i'm glad you enjoyed it :-)
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aw this is the sweetest poem i've read in ages, i can tell you really care about your mom and it shows. we can disagree with our mom's but at the end of the day you love them and you love them back. your mom is lucky to have a sweet daughter like you. well done and keep on writing xxx
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As a mom, that really touched my heart.
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