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My favorite holiday

Today's my favorite holiday
A beautiful shade of green
Drinking from morning to night
And every hour in between
Drinking in my PJ's
Drinking with my honey
Drinking til I see things
Like the Easter bunny
Drinking, Drinking, Drinking
Til the end of day
Drinking, drinking, drinking
Cuz I don't give a damn what ya say!

~March 17th~

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Written March 24th, 2005

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  • DevilsWrongHand
    April 11, 2005
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    Thank you dear!
    XOXO
    ~laura


  • Twisted Fairy
    April 11, 2005
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    ick..I know exactly what this is like. Around the worst time in my life I began alcohol consumption. You are a good poet. I like the way you write. Keep up the good work.

  • DevilsWrongHand
    April 7, 2005
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    Thank you john. hope all is well for you. hope you have kept me in mind and looking for an adopt-a-person for me.
    XOXO
    ~laura


  • J Rhys Davies
    April 6, 2005
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    This was just too funny girl. I know a lot of people that could totally relate to this, because it seems like they celebrate only holidays that have lots of drinking in them. Nicely done my dear.

    ~ John

  • DevilsWrongHand
    April 4, 2005
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    Glad everyone enjoyed my work and put some smiles on some faces. That's what i'm here for.
    XOXO
    ~Laura

  • jabberwocky
    March 29, 2005
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    Awwww, this was cute! It's nice to be able to write about something frivolous, mindless and fun!

    Can't be heavy and deep all the time, can it? Nice job, you made me smile!


  • DefinitiveFreak silver member
    March 25, 2005
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    I think it's bizarre how non-Irish people celebrate St Patrick's Day with such gusto. I'm Irish, and I don't celebrate it at all. I don't even know the legend! I think it all boils down to the fact that I'm not Catholic. The Irish Protestants may as well not be Irish, cos the schools don't teach anything about Irish heritage. So I go out and try and learn it for myself. But I still don't really celebrate St Patrick's Day. I think I should. Yes indeed. I did like yer poem by the way... Twas happy and jolly and stuffs.


  • Forms of Me
    March 25, 2005
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    HA! HA! This is just tooooo funny Laura.
    You made me chuckle...
    Liz


  • Red Devil
    March 25, 2005
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    I'll drink to that!

    I love this -hic- poem. Hey I'm Irish, Scottish, And German, so any reason to drink is a good one, and St. Patricks Day encourages it (or it should). lol. Good poem about a wonderful, blurry, double-visioned pasttime.
    Red Devil

  • DevilsWrongHand
    March 25, 2005
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    Doug,
    No i'm not Irish but i have met a few irish people in my day. Glad you liked this write.
    XOXO
    ~laura

  • DevilsWrongHand
    March 25, 2005
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    Thanks small town loser
    Glad you enjoyed my poem
    XOXO
    ~laura

  • DevilsWrongHand
    March 25, 2005
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    Poetic Soldier,
    Glad you liked this one. How bout you take me out for drinks sometime?
    XOXO
    ~laura

  • DevilsWrongHand
    March 25, 2005
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    Thanks for reading Precious Biker, seems like i have a new fan.
    XOXO
    ~laura


  • Watuwant silver member
    March 24, 2005
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    Spoken like a true Irish lassie! Are you, perchance? Although not Irish myself, I too like to indulge in their favorite past time! Well done, my young friend.
    doug

  • small town loser
    March 24, 2005
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    HAHAHA, This was great, lol I loved it, I have never heard a poem about drinking, so this was my first, lol and so far I like what I see. Great write! thanks for sharing


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    March 24, 2005
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    Drinking poem is excellent. Its fun and full of so much fun. Drinking oh yes drinking... hummmmmmm oh what can I say about drinking.... Call me a cab... Wonderful poem. It flows as a drink slowly travels down to warm my tummy.. Oh my drinking.. Thanks for a fun wonderful read. By the way... pass me another.. and a double for you.. hick up..


  • March 24, 2005
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    Wonderful!

    Ah Hah! Green drinks! Tried that once, didn't work too well on me! so I stick to my " Silent Sam"!
    Love this one..
    Drinking, Drinking, Drinking
    Til the end of day
    Drinking, drinking, drinking
    Cuz I don't give a damn what ya say!

    Good on you! Who cares! As long as we are happy what we are doing!

    Wonderful!

  • DevilsWrongHand
    March 24, 2005
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    Thanks shameless my dear for reading my work yet again.
    XOXO
    ~laura


  • Shameless1 silver member
    March 24, 2005
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    hrmm...thristy much...damn..have a drink or somethinG ...nice St. Patty's day poem..lmao...

  • DevilsWrongHand
    March 24, 2005
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    HAHA thank you very much for reading.
    XOXO
    ~laura


  • Thayla
    March 24, 2005
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    An excellent poem, but a disturbing thought. Just remember who you are and you'll be fine. Have fun and great poem.

  • DevilsWrongHand
    March 24, 2005
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    Thank you for reading dear. And thanks for everything else you've commented on! Thanks!
    XOXO
    ~laura

  • Christopher Hall
    March 24, 2005
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    yes!! Drinking all the time!! loved this piece,i'd applaud it twice if i could

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