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What I want

What I want now
Is to re-live today
To go in slow motion
Cuz I've never felt this way
This feeling inside me
I just want you now
To pull you inside me
Just show me how
God I love you
There's nothing I wouldn't do
Take my all
Cuz our Love's so true
I can't wait now
Until you're inside
Push yourself in me
Take me for a ride
One I'll never forget
And always crave more
So I throw you on the ground
And lock the bedroom door!

~March 16th~

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Written March 24th, 2005

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  • Lil Miss Pirate1
    April 21, 2005
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    this is so cool and humorous

  • DevilsWrongHand
    April 12, 2005
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    Thanks sure if i could come up w/ something good enough to write for people i would. i ain't that good though
    XOXO
    ~laura


  • PolarbearApocalypse
    April 12, 2005
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    really creative!!!!!!, i wish someone would write me a poem like that lol, your awesome, keep up the good work!!!


  • Forms of Me
    April 11, 2005
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    get him tigeress... Keep up the great work.

  • DevilsWrongHand
    March 24, 2005
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    Thank you very much for reading txbabygrul!
    XOXO
    ~laura

  • Txredneck-07
    March 24, 2005
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    awesome write

  • DevilsWrongHand
    March 24, 2005
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    Thanks for reading shameless glad you enjoyed.
    XOXO
    ~laura


  • Shameless1 silver member
    March 24, 2005
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    ...HAHAHAHA...nice...started out all soft and tender loving then "wham" inside you go and slam the door behind you...nicely done.

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