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Say Good Bye

I need you to be here for me.
I love you so much.
To my heart you are the key.
You promised things would get better.
so I waited as long as I could.
I have something to say to you but not in a letter.
I wish this was not how it has to be.
Remember I love you with all my heart.
But because of the pain I must set you free.
The tears are running down my face now.
I know you love me but this is too hard.
I want to fix this but i don't know how.
Justin I want to be with you all my life.
Maybe we can try again when things are different.
I know when we grew older I was to be your wife
but that's all over now and I'm sorry.
Now I must let you fly.
I wish I could keep you but I can't
So to end this poem i will just say good bye.

Author notes

This is for Justin
Written March 23rd, 2005

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  • Tercil gold member
    September 29, 2008
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    awwwww, love I think it is still,


  • budderfly silver member
    September 10, 2005
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    I enjoyed this... you tap into a common place in all of us who've had to face the harsh reality of a relationship and concluded we must let go.

  • Love-is-Eternal
    June 1, 2005
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    good job cat.


  • avar valley
    March 29, 2005
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    Well damn. I have been there. Parting truly is such sweet sorrow. Glad to see you wrote again but too bad it is on a sour note. Anyway, I wish you the best of luck with Justin.
    _KTG