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Between dark past and future flight

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Between dark past and future flight
Effect and Cause we question quite,
rhyme time between midnight and noon
to read, mark, learn, digest this tune.
Soul travels far, ka’s second sight
scouts out from dune to blue lagoon -
with moral codes plays fey buffoon.

Between dark past and future flight
the butterfly finds wings for flight
although, in silk spin knit cocoon,
it knows not dawn from afternoon.
Mind mirage magic may excite
confusing notions – far and soon
merge premonition’s present boon.

Between dark past and future flight
trace space, expand and pace delight ~
from morn till midnight one should learn
to seed born insight, harvest earn,
bend to contentment very soon
ends, means, all harmonies attune
heart, soul, which whole from parts return.


Between dark past and future flight
now ‘stalag_might’ checks 'stalag tight'
mankind evolved from the baboon
to trace his race pace picayune.
between the darkness and the light
most squander chances opportune
dreams rose themed spurned, they haste to tomb.
Vague contexts blurred, restrictions fight
unshadowed vision full, shy moon
casts spell whose pull’s forgot by noon.


Between dark past and future flight
The wheel spins on, ignores ‘wrong’, ‘right’
As light, dark, rainbow’s ark all churn
fear not fall near, nor rise call spurn.
Sandman plays game outside luck, blight,
for more than intellect's harpoon.
Hope blooms so anguish, heartache, prune.

Between dark past and future flight
oft ‘Justice’ seems a notion quite
outside God’s scheme - ‘on joue le clown’
play insecurity immune
while mocking empty social rite
inventing, changing Scheme and gods
to bury fears inspired by sods.

Between dark past and future flight,
through silver starred aragonite,
December’s frost melts into June.
Some worries shrink while some balloon.
Concealed may be revealed despite
the veil few tear – invite, festoon
lass lonesome on her honeymoon.

Between dark past and future flight
Cupid, Apollo, Aphrodite,
injustice remedy, dragoon
Fate’s darts, spite filled, to build pontoon,
surprise to catalyse, excite,
scene set for future hid from sight
till pattern pieces knit in tune.

Between dark past and future flight
some role reversals reunite
checks, balances, inopportune
risks which too haughty silver spoon
takes, greedy, - tides turn, pride indict.
Who, rich, Today would play and croon,
Tomorrow buries very soon.

Between dark past and future flight
sleep paints saint, social parasite,
in wavelengths rainbow may lampoon
for wage-slave, sage, or loon tycoon.
Blind bodies curled, bind whirl-swirled quite,
from youth uncouth, ungainly goon,
“to lean and slippered pantaloon.”

Between dark past and future flight
enchanting maid, heroic knight,
play out day’s doubt, - though beer saloon
may spur the bleary eyed to swoon.
Einstein’s ignored for much which might
influence an inner tune
or new create, decoding rune.

Between dark past and future flight
is vision sent meant to incite
destiny's spermatazoon
egged on by p[h]antomime cartoon ?
Is insight drawn through second-sight -
though chance seems blind behind sin’s call
true dance dreams find combined in all.

Author notes

Ka or Kaa
Ancient Egyptian term for the double or astral body. See also Ba


pic Order from Chaos
http://flickr.com/photos/anua22a/1284578577/sizes/o/in/set-72157600710863506/


For rhyme scheme see R.W. Answell ? 18xx/19xx ?

No trace on the Internet either of poem or author as of April 2008 and I can no longer find my source book.
See below in notes for the initial version written 23 March 2005


Between the Sunset and the Sea


Between the gate post and the gate
I lingered with my love till late;
And what cared I for time of night
Till wakened by the watch dog’s bite.
And thud of leathering boxtoed fate
Between the gatepost and the gate.

Between the seaside and the sea
I kissed my love and she kissed me;
But rapturous day was gruesome night,
And what is love but bloom and blight ?
And what is kiss of mine to thee
Between the seaside and the sea ?

Between the sunshine and the sun
I saw a face that hinted fun;
But what is fun, and what is face,
When driven at life’s killing pace ?
I simply say that I have none
Between the sunshine and the sun.

Between the bumble and the bee
Full many a soul has had to flee;
And what is love, may I enquire,
When asked to build the kitchen fire ?
Or who would not leap in the sea
Between the bumble and the bee?

Between the tea store and the tea
There is a wide immensity;
A dollar twenty five a pound,
And not a nickel to be found.
Then what has fate in store for thee
Between the tea store and the tea ?

R.W. ANSWELL
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Checks and Balances

Between dark past and future flight



Between dark past and future flight
the butterfly finds wings for flight
although within the spun cocoon
it knows not dawn from afternoon.

From morn till midnight we can learn
to seed born insight, harvest earn.
Thus to contentment very soon
sweet thoughts will bend, send sweeter tune.

Between dark past and future flight
trace space, expand and pace delight ~
although Fate now plays the buffoon
mocks efforts with uncoded rune.

As light, dark, rainbow’s ark do churn
fear nothing near yet nothing spurn,
for more than meets March eye in June
may blossom ~ anguish, heartache, prune, ~

for fears grow dim, soon tears do dry,
and Sandman grim can only sigh
when confidence and trust balloon,
scout out from dune to blue lagoon.


JR 23 March 2005

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Comments

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  • this was a very interesting read and i enjoyed it very much though a little lon g it holds your attention.

  • Night Hope gold member
    April 27

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    Yes. This is the one, Sweetie. Beautiful still, of course. Has it really been 3 years since I told ya so??? Wow. Congratulations, my Friend. Timeless, classic & eloquent. Wanda

  • WritingWretch gold member
    April 26

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    deft,elequent and mystical.

    I like the tone and point of view. Captivating, a must read over and over. return the favor? espically my poem 'M theory as a butterfly. Seems we have a similiar point of view on some topics. Thanks for the good read.


  • lauren nicole
    July 9, 2007

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    Wow. Wow, wow, wow. I keep re-reading this a million times, mesmerized. This is such a perfect piece, I so wish I had your talent. The rhyming was impeccable, the imagery was outstanding, and was no doubt one of the best poems I've read. I thank you for entering my contest, I'm so glad I was able to read this. It really is wonderful. I love the writing, so keep on writing. God bless and good luck.

  • Whispers79
    March 31, 2005
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    This is beautiful!!!
    So descriptive...I re-read a million times.....it's raining here and this felt like frsh air!!!
    Thanks for sharing.
    Tisha

  • LdyBrknWing gold member
    March 30, 2005
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    Congratulations on the win of the Bronze Trophy! This was a beautiful write, so full of imagery! You're rhyme was flawless! This had a wonderful flow, and feel to it! Great work! Again, congratulations!
    Paula

  • Razzberry silver member
    March 30, 2005
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    BRAVO!!!!

    BRAVO!!!! Congrats!!!!! Outstanding poem!!!!

  • poet girl
    March 25, 2005
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    I really liked your rhyme in this write. Pen on, poet.

  • NurseyPoo
    March 24, 2005
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    You know how much I admire your work. This is an amazing write. Very soothing and serene. Good luck in this contest.
    ~~~POO~~~

  • Night Hope gold member
    March 24, 2005
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    'Between the darkness and the light
    the butterfly finds wings for flight
    although within the spun cocoon
    it knows not dawn from afternoon.'


    I love flutterbyes...this is a gorgeous poem, my Friend...such contemplative Thought throughout...your words seem to touch on nearly every realm & aspect of Life...very well done...Good luck in the contest... Wanda

  • LionessK Greeters member
    March 23, 2005
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    Very nice..it is always interesting to see how someone will write about a picture..I like your last two lines the most..thank you for entering the contest and good luck

    ~Kristy

  • Dove Moderators member
    March 23, 2005
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    This is absolutely beautiful
    I love this one Cindy
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