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Writing Poetry (A Haiku)

emotions flowing
mind painting pictures with words
writing poetry

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Poetry is my biggest hobby. It's a part of my life. #5
Written March 22nd, 2005

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  • Frogzter gold member
    April 9, 2005
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    This sounds like something I want to do all the time. Write about emotions! This is a very cute Haiku and you have a wonderful way with words. Thanks for commenting on some of mine. The encouragement is nice from time to time. God Bless~


  • smosher
    April 5, 2005
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    Good Lord! This is Genious! Wonderful! I am almost speechless! I have nothing else to say! Good Write!!!!!!!!!!!!
    God Bless
    Liz


  • J Rhys Davies
    March 28, 2005
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    You really nailed this one. I love the fact that three lines can hold so much within them and tell volumes about who wrote them. You did an excellent job with this. Kudos and then some.

    ~ John


  • SexyAngel0418
    March 28, 2005
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    WOW... THis is a really nice Haiku and it is awesome because it is a poem about writing poetry!!! I would say good luck in the contest but it's too late for that, huh??? LOL

    Hugs,
    Beth

  • Silver Kitsune
    March 26, 2005
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    Nice Piece!

    This is a really great Haiku I agree with sandygram very beautiful indeed

    -mistic wings


  • Sandygram silver member
    March 25, 2005
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    AMAZING

    This is a beautiful haiku. I haven't written many of these but I enjoy reading them. This is a terrific one. Take care, Sandy

  • pozo
    March 23, 2005
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    Lovely haiku which I liked a lot, amazing and well written Keep writing, this was a beautiful write which I liked a lot
    All the best,
    Pozo


  • qnhoneybee
    March 23, 2005
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    This sets up a very nice scene and one I'm sure we can all relate to as I know this expresses how I feel I write. I let my emotions flows and then let my mind wander to the part of my brain that keeps stored all the beautiful images of the world. Great job with this Haiku!

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