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Be a man

stop being a boy be man
realize i am not like i am the opposite
Ur suppose be a solider, but Ur not
cause i told u the truth
and u got mad
write cruel things what ever u like cause i not the only one is immature
Ur play with my emotions when decide break up

i don't believe in god so what i don't
hate me cause i heartless bitch u made me this way
see i can write hateful poems, if u want to play like this i play Ur game

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Written March 22nd, 2005

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  • fairyprincess22
    December 5, 2005
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    bad job

    Hey.
    Im sorry about that i did not know about what this was about.
    Im sorry .
    Love you
    Edited on Dec 06, 8:31 p.m. because 'Because i wrongful edited'.