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Equations on the Heart

He was beautiful to me.
Making ingenius equations out of emotions.
He makes his way through life, dividing women...from girls.

Adding and subtracting hearts until I stood alone.
I hold his heart in my hand.
He is mine, and I am his.
Solve for X.

Author notes

Inspired by a poem I heard on TV. It was similar but I changed everything about it because it was too long.
Written March 22nd, 2005

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  • Lusus Naturae
    April 19, 2005
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    Actually, I loath math as well but I figured I could turn it into something beautiful.


  • lunatick
    April 18, 2005
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    Oooh, I like the poem. Ick, I hate the Math - LOL! I hate Math. But it was a pretty good poem nonetheless, I liked it!

    -Lunatick


  • quietly burning
    March 23, 2005
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    i like what u came up very much ... clever and entirely fresh