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Lune de miel du vampire

Bathed in midnight's blessings
he stands, pale in a lustful aurgury
the candles around him dance
in passionate lambent
reflecting the desire within him

a fiery seranade
his eyes sing out to me
as the creatures of the night squeal
in anticipation of hunts to come

His porcelain figure fragrant
with the mists of yearning
The wind rushes, enticing our silken caress

Our intentions hang, intense
swallowed in the fog of dusk
as we embrace in the shadows
forever bound to them

His lips, warm, part for mine
a bold kiss we share,
blood from our last hunt lingering
on our soft tongues

His mouth wanders over my body
hot breath escaping, igniting my desires
finding my jugular, I shudder at his bite
Liquid love fills his red eyes
as I tremble in the cold night air

Jagged, my teeth
as they suck...inhaling his soul

Our mouths, painted in hues of hunger
yearn for each other

We undress with a new found
celerity
Naked, the moon paints us pearl
As I unleash feverish kissed on his
bare chest
Scarlet smears lingering
as marks of our love

His soft, cold fingers trail
down my belly
to the origin of my lust
slowly, he rubs
my embers growing stronger
My tongue travels with a mind of it's own

Our caress electrifies
inspired by his ripe body, I lay him down
frissoning as we meet
Our smooth bodies mellifluous
Our eyes intense, glittering with starlight

Wolfs join in with our harmonious moans
As we peak into the frigid air
shuddering, our hot bodies touch

Love inveterate, we kiss
Another lust approaches us
as we fly
together
in search of prey
Lune de miel du vampire

Author notes

"Lune de miel du vampire" means Vampire's honeymoon in french. If you have any questions about word meanings or anything, ask me or look it up at www.dictionary.com.
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Written March 22nd, 2005

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  • MistressD
    April 28, 2005
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    Wow... I love this sort of poem and so few people can do it properly, well done I love it!


  • mesmerize me
    April 24, 2005
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    No i wish for you to keep this poem in my contest.It is really good,and well you know i'm not lying being as how i commented on it awhile ago.

  • mesmerize me
    March 28, 2005
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    Great write...this was soo good.I loved the word you used aswell,intelligence in art is the best.I was blown away.Great job!


  • March 22, 2005
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    Beautifully wirtten!

    A wonderful way with words Ashlee, you pulled me into this darkened romance, wonderful imagery, and very passionate, extremely well written, you did a FANTASTIC write, just amazing! All the best in the contest, I can't see this not getting a trophy! Love and many blessings, Annie

  • chpoet19
    March 22, 2005
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    Excellent!

    I like the imagery too. I think this poem rocks. Please tell me if you write anymore like this. I would like to read it if you do.


  • kjd
    March 22, 2005
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    STANDING O!

    Fantastic imagery, soaring passions...dayummm! Strong, beautifully penned write--enjoyed!


  • ShatteredSilverStar
    March 22, 2005
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    DARKLY ROMANTIC AND QUITE EROTIC, I LIKE THIS ALOT MOSTLY BECAUSE, I FIND MYSELF WRITING DARK POEMS LATELY AND EVEN A BIT OF EROTICA, GREAT JOB, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK..AND PLEASE VISIT MY PAGE!
    TANYA

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