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Golfing?? (Senryu)

Club swings, misses ball,
Foot kicks ball across the greens,
Bubba's playing golf!

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I just love Bubba jokes
Written March 22nd, 2005

A contest entry

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  • SexyAngel0418
    March 28, 2005
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    LOL... This is a funny one... It is a cute way to look at a Bubba joke!!!

    Hugs,
    Beth


  • Hoosierpoet silver member
    March 27, 2005
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    Wonder who Bubba is? Anyway, sounds like a typical Sunday afternoon duffer to me. Good job.

    Moses

  • PennyB
    March 23, 2005
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    Wow!! I am very surprised to hear that noone knows Bubba!
    It may be a regional thing, or perhaps a Southern thing. Around here "Bubba" is the generic typical hillbilly who just can never get anything right. He is not used to make fun of, so much as to laugh at ourselves. Anyway, thanks for reading and I am glad that you like this. God Bless and Hugs, Penny


  • cutiepie gold member
    March 23, 2005
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    great

    I enjoyed this...I have to admit that I dont know who Bubba is either, but it could be read as anyone Nice format


  • babybird
    March 23, 2005
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    cute

    Strange, but kind of endearing nonetheless.


  • CarterTachikawa
    March 23, 2005
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    I have no clue who Bubba is either but it's kinda funny. Reminds me of some funny golf videos that I've seen. Very good. Best of luck in the contest.

    ~CT


  • myron silver member
    March 23, 2005
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    what is this? i dont get it...i guess it's some kind of in joke between you and bubba...some sort of insult which is funny?

    im not too sure it's a senryu either...it seems more like an epigram...but anyway, all the best in the contest...

  • Mickie27
    March 23, 2005
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    LOL Sweet and to the point. I actually enjoyed this version of playing golf. Perhaps we could have a game of golf sometime. As long as you let me kick the golf ball in a hole in one?


  • Edna Sweetlove
    March 23, 2005
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    Who's Bubba?


  • Kendall Campbell
    March 23, 2005
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    I'm plenty familliar with how Bubba must have felt. Made me think of the first 2 or 50 times i tried playing a round of golf.


  • Cat gold member
    March 23, 2005
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    Wow, this is like looking in the mirror. : )

    Mary


  • peluche
    March 22, 2005
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    This was a humorous touch to a game that definitly elicits a wide array of emotions. I also liked the style you chose for this piece. The shortness made your words have a greater effect. Great job, I wish you the best.
    Edited on Mar 22, 10:28 p.m. because ''.


  • Vickie J
    March 22, 2005
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    This was a scream. Poor Bubba needs to take some anger management classes. Hope you do well in the contest!!!vj

  • Sweet Briar
    March 22, 2005
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    Lol this is funny Reminds me when I tried to play golf and I got so made at the ball I started to kick it lol. Thanks for the laugh hon I gotta share this with the hubby when he gets home

    Jenn

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