Watch the fairies dance and play as the moon shines so bright, though it seems one fairy has gone astray on this glittering starry night.
The moon is her love, but it shall not be. Forbidden it is, the moon and a fairy. But she continues to sit in his lap, rebelling for a love so strong.
She is shunned for her fancies, but she does not care, though her moon worries so much for her.
She tells him not to worry and kisses his cheek before singing him a lullaby, goodnight.
Their love was strong enough to stay together.
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Written March 22nd, 2005
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Lovely image and story, Rose! I like your take on it. And I say again--WOW YOU AMAZE ME! Gawd...a whole story that makes perfect sense in 100 words. *shakes head* I heart chu.
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I was inspired by a picture. It only shows up when those memberships come around.
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Such a sweet and beautiful write Rose. It's a lovely read. Who'd have thought of a fairy and the moon? It's actually quite calming too. I likey this write.
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It is a pretty story. It does seem like a lot of people liked it. Maybe it was the latest one posted, maybe not. However, I liked Passion out of all of them personally. Call me a pervert or whatever.
I still like this one though. 
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Rose honey, this is absolutely gorgeous. sighs Very beautiful ... I can't think of anything to say other than its beautiful.. but i sad that didn't i
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I had only heard of them in a contest I wrote one for a while ago. You're welcome and thank you for your kind words. I enjoy writing them, but only have four.
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I have never heard of a drabble before. Thank you for informing me. I know how difficult it is to create something that must be an exact number of words and I think you have done it brilliantly!
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As always, mom, you know how much I appreciate your comments and I give you links to my fairy writes just because I know you love fairies so much and hope that you enjoy them. I'm glad you liked this one as well.
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twinklestart, thaan you for taking the time to read and comment. I love kittens but have probably only used that background once. This story is a particular kind as well and is not a poem. It is a drabble and drabbles of made up of exactly 100 words. That's why it is so short.
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Mystic Fire, thank you for taking the time to read and comment on this piece. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I loved fairy tales when I was a child!
I still enjoy them though.
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Lapis Luzi, this story is a particular type. It is called a drabble and is exactly 100 words. No more and no less. That's why I had to express my imagination in so few words in it. Thank you for your kind words.
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I love this one...You know my love of fairies to begin with and this has such a soft gentle flow to it...Delicate as a fairies wings...Penned to perfection.
Love Tory-your AP mom
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this is great! i love it. it's so sweet. i love the background and picture too. they really fit. unlike mine, the background goes with what's written. all my stuff has a kitten background. i even have a darkness poem with a kitten background. so yea. mine didn't make sense but this does. however, it seems more of a poem than a story, a short one at that. i was wondering if it was a poem posted on storywrite or what, because i just found it a little odd. anywho, it was really good.
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This was very pretty, and very romantic. It reminds me of an old fairy tale. Great job on this, and the presentation was well done as well.
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Such a beautiful story. I love it! I think that it being short was very effective as it showed how capable you are of showing your imagination using so few words. Keep the stories coming!
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