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Shining Star

Every night, I dream of you
You are my shining star
You are in my mind at all times and
every night, I dream of you
I think I am in heaven
I can't imagine life without you
Every night, I dream of you
You are my shining star

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I don't really like this one.
Written March 22nd, 2005

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  • GauArrowny
    March 23, 2005
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    Yes, short, sweet and cute. I like. Reminds me of something I said. That wouldn't be inspired from that, would it?